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Mfer2dCommentedCh 1616 Blade of Shadows- Mfer14dCommented
Lad should be the right word 🙂
"...That's great," Eren had many questions to ask, but now was not the time to do so. He noticed that Michael's move to acquire Seal Fusion's knowledge damaged his vessel, drastically reducing the time he'd left to prepare. There was no more time to waste for that young lass. - Mfer22dCommented
Using —> Losing 😊
This paragraph has been deleted. - Mfer1mthCommented"Die! Evil Immortal!"
- Mfer2mthCommentedThe two Demon Saints only assessed Vale for a while before returning back to the Abyss and closing the gate in the process!
- Mfer4mthCommented
I love Sunny’s character development ❤️
'That's personal growth right there…' - Mfer4mthCommented
Forgetten Shore’s original trio
The Shadow, the Star, and the Oracle - Mfer4mthCommented"My Lord, my Lady. I told you that we must come here to gather supplies, but that was not entirely true. To be honest… I just wanted you to see Weave, at least once. So that someone would remember it — remember us — even when the ships and the buildings are gone, too."
- Mfer4mthCommented
Bro seriously needs a chapstick
Michael licked his lower lip, and the corner of his lip curled upward. - Mfer4mthCommented
He lowkey got that rizz soultrait activated
"But then again. I like you as well, Alice. I got to know you even before I manifested my War Rune. You helped me unconditionally and today you tried to protect me while putting yourself in danger. You might look like a cold person to others, but to me, you're a nice and caring person. Your personality is great, your strength is unrivaled among your peers, and you are drop-dead gorgeous. I'm pretty sure that everyone would agree with me if they were to see your true self!" Michael added, praising Alice. - Mfer4mthCommentedMichael scoffed and patted her back, "Yes, yes. Kidnap me all you want after you beat up these idiots."
- Mfer5mthPosted
A very promising webnovel! The story is going good so far but just to point out few things that can perhaps enhance the reader’s experience. I’ve noticed spelling errors, confusing grammatical structures, and some smaller details that were mentioned from the early chapters seems to be forgotten by author-san like the inspection skill that mc received on early chapter but later mentioned that he needs a skill akin to it? Then there’s the weird path development too, for example, wouldn’t it make more sense if the fighter/brawler path started as it is? Then progress to Battle Master? The word “master” implies mc has mastered this path so shouldn’t it be the last ascension or at least second to the last then ascend its rank to higher realm? 🤔 I really do hope you put extra love and attention to the details of your work author-san cuz I believe this novel is going to be one of the best out novels there 🙂 please keep up the good work and looking forward to your work’s development!
- Mfer6mthCommented
Sounded a bit like Rocky’s quote with a bit of the author’s twist 😬
"Maybe their parents, who work in the same field of vision, didn't train or prepare them for this," Rain thought. "There is no better teacher than life, huh. Let me tell you something you already know. Life is tough, and it's not always easy. No matter how strong you are, it can knock you down and keep you down if you allow that. Nobody can hit as hard as life can. But it's not just about how hard life hits you; it's about how you respond. You have the power to get back up and keep going. Don't blame others or make excuses for where you are right now. Don't be a coward and give up. You have to be willing to take the hits and keep moving forward no matter what. Believe in yourself and your worth. Don't let life's challenges define you. Stand up, face the struggles, deal with it, and keep fighting for what you want. That's how you can overcome the tough times and find your way to success." - Mfer9mthCommented"You really do have your grandfather's eyes... I just wish he was here to see you. Maybe you're his reincarnation." She chuckled before taking Seth into her arms.
- Mfer9mthCommented
😭😭😭🤣🤣🤣🤣
"You're really brave! I just recalled that this potion can only be consumed by those who had a special physique. Since we had a similar experience after consuming the Darkness Possession, I guess I don't have to warn you about it…" - Mfer9mthCommented
I thought he bought 400 pills?
He had gotten to the Middle Stage just 250 pills in, but he wanted to keep going. He could also go out to buy a few more pills but chose not to do that. If he broke through to the Middle-Stage 2nd Circle this quickly, he would only be labeled as a genius. - Mfer10mthCommentedThere was one main reason for him to make a lot of money. And that was that he needed a lot of money to buy enough pills to supplement his aura training. He knew that he couldn't advance without the help of pills, and if he was going to attend an Aura Knight Academy, he would have to show some improvement from time to time.
- Mfer11mthCommented
Can he just go to the graveyards and extract them? 👀🤣
The most logical answer to this was extracting the corpses of Lords and Adventurers. They possessed Soultraits, after all. Shouldn't he be able to extract their Soultraits as well then?