(May be a little biased because I've read Alot of this author's past work)Chapter 28 at time of postAlright let's start out with the System, it reminds me of a mix between the first "I can make everything level up" and "The Arcane path" if you've read any of this author's past work. While it may be a system it is more of just a status that details his skills and abilities.The story is very well written and I'm not talking only about the grammar. The description that goes into some of the characters seems very thought out.Character Design... My only problem with what I've read so far is that the MC has the attitude of a turtle(Might change cause lil man is 5) but other than that every Character has Alot of depth and aren't Npcs.World Background is pretty good because we have gotten a general history of the world and some recent history.Summary: Yea I'd say it's definitely a good read for what has been released and it seems to have a lot of potential to be great because of the way it is set up.

At the moment, I'm really enjoying the story. The rhythm itself is very pleasant. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

is there a cheaper way to buy this book? Author, sorry your story is good, just not worth 200$

Man, another Work?! I hope this one will stay until the end.

It's a very interesting concept with characters that seem to have life in them, not just npcs. My main problem is all the plot holes/times the author contradicts himself. It's frustrating to try and read. Especially since the author talks about improving the mcs intelligence as he progresses being a mage. Then, to only show what I feel is a decrease in intelligence.

Harem or nah? B———————————————————————->~

Starting off, it’s my first time delving into this author’s work, and I must say, I’m not a fan of using paraphrasing like the Rocky quote to pad out word count. If there’s more of that, it’s an automatic 2/5 for me in terms of writing quality. I’ve reached Chapter 55 and intend to continue until Chapter 150 before providing further feedback on the pacing. So far, the story shows promise, but it comes with a hefty price tag. I could recommend several novels with superior world-building and character development. As for this author’s style, it seems quite generic, relying heavily on tropes from previous works(note I haven’t read his previous works but I’m sure if I were to look 80% positive I would see some parallels). Despite covering some aspects of world-building, by Chapter 55, readers are still in the dark about the system’s possibilities. Removing the fastest way to gain that knowledge(School) through war feels like a misstep. While it’s understandable to show the world progressing without the MC’s involvement, the narrative feels stale. War is happening, yet we’re confined to the MC’s home until events conveniently move the plot forward. There’s a disconnect between what characters in the story know about the war’s progress and what readers are privy to. It doesn’t make sense for outlying villages, unaffected by the war and days away, to possess more knowledge than the capital(2 days from the fight), especially with its greater resources and influence. This lack of coherence in world-building detracts from immersion. In summary, the attempt to keep readers in the dark feels forced and doesn’t align with the story’s setting, particularly given the capital’s status as the hub of civilization. It’s unlikely that other nobles wouldn’t spread information about the war to the common people. Apologies for the rant, but this is my honest critique based on my reading experience.

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AUTHOR/ TRANSLATER I MUST APOLOGIZE, I irresponsible left tablet open and don't know who wrote a 'few' terrible comments. I am sincerely sorry for any difficulties the comments may have caused you. Could you possibly find them all and erase, please. Will say, though, love your work and due look forward to reading more.