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AriResonance_
AriResonance_Lv141yr
2023-07-09 20:44

I see potentially but started off weakly. Mc’s parents tragically die but mc dies at the same time of what i presume a heart failure? Something of the sort. No tension or excitement built up. Was pretty flat. There is potential right mow but it isn’t my cup of tea.

MMORPG Regressor: The Villain Griefs Pros To Take The Championship

OakFlame
4.1
19 Chs

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OakFlame
OakFlameAuthor

Yo broman I've rewritten the first chap, if you've got time want to check it out and let me know what you think? :p feel free to drop the rating if u think is worse than before. Have a great day :)

1yr
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cerealsoup
cerealsoupLv1

Absolutely amazing work. The world built by the author and the style and clarity with which it is presented is amazing. Very young yet the stability of updates is sure to be awesome. The story is developed and paced in a slow, intriguing and very entertaining manner with most of the focus leading up to the championship. With Bjorn's very fun, slightly airheaded yet extremely cool character and creative mobs and other players, the story is excelling in that department too. Cant wait for more!

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Garessta
GaresstaLv3

This one is good... Reminds me of reading LMS again... The writing style is great, the grammar is 100%, the basic cool stuff - everything is hit. Wish i could say more, but its too early to speak about plot and such.

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OakFlame
OakFlameAuthor

There are two ways to win something. Make yourself stronger, or make your enemies weaker. I'll opt for the former with some high-quality writing, while Bjorn handles the later and griefs enemy teams before every match. Heh, I can't really grief my fellow authors, right? I definitely would never do anything like that. Hm... They might think bad of me if they read this. Perhaps... I should give them a *present* to make up for it. Heh heh...

1yr
Chestnutriceeee
ChestnutriceeeeLv12

Very fun story with an equally fun protagonist and take on the regression genre. I don't like game novels but this one is a certain exception and I am sure it'll be for others too! Very solid, highly recommended

1yr
Unsoph
UnsophLv11

The grammar has no glaring flaws and is pretty good, unlike some other novels. Let's talk bout why I gave 2 stars in things other than writing quality and stability of updates. The first chapter wasn't very first chapter like, in my opinion, it starts off well but instantly delves into a fight and then a weird way to start the regression. It isn't dynamic enough to immediately entrap readers and emotions were all over the place. It could have been much more enthralling than this.

1yr
Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv15

The synopsis gives expectations that one would expect to be interesting that the first chapter fails to deliver. There is no emotional buildup and it falls flat. Not interesting. It also seems like the story was all over the place. The story could have been shorted and compacted into smaller chapters with higher quality and some of them felt unnecessarily long. However, Oakflame, the author has improved when compared to his previous works. It’s not a bad novel, but it’s not that good either.

1yr
Warmaisach
WarmaisachLv15

Grammar is alright. I didn't see any glaring flaws in the first chapter, which is pretty good. The scene is like straight out of a shonen anime, which makes me feel like the MC is portrayed as "too cool", killing the realism and immersion for me. Also, lul, Top team in EU can't even compete with third place of South America.

1yr
IkuSaari
IkuSaariLv13

Honestly, shouldn't be that bad in comparison to other novels with novel-length names, but I read the synopsis, powering through on the power of Iceland being mentioned, and ended up with so-called flat affect in the first chapter. There is no excitement, no feel of real high stakes despite the events, and the writing style needs work bigly. It's okay though. It's not bad enough that I would regret reading any of it

1yr
Thanatos151
Thanatos151Lv12

Brings me back to reading LMS for the first time, so far I have been loving the book an cant wait for more chapters. wishing the author all the best and hope they keep writing!

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