The story is interesting and flowing. The use of punctuation is also neat and good. I liked reading this story. But there are some parts that I'm confused about, what does green-flag; red-flag mean? Honestly, I don't understand at all. Maybe adding details about it at the end of the chapter makes it easier for readers to read. Good job author!
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LIKEThank you for the meaningful review! Actually I used those words because it's highly used in social media to refer to people that are passable (green flags) and the ones that should be avoided (red flags). But maybe I'll try to write the meaning of it to avoid confusion, and I'll also consider your suggestions.