Hello Author, This novel is well written, super interesting, sets up the characters pretty quickly in the first several chapters. The only issue i have with it is I can't visualize the characters besides Vincent because most of them weren't well described so some of the first couple chapters were more like words on paper. I would also like a better description of the school she goes to if that's at all relevant. Like because she's a rich girl betrothed but runs away and goes to a shabby college, I'd really like to know why he said that, and also I would like to be able to know what her new friends look like apart from one lady having a mole. I suppose they're probably Filipino because you mentioned this but you could mention it earlier in the story, and include your description of chesah who comes from Switzerland.. because she's probably likely Caucasian vs the tan Filipinos at her own college
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LIKEI will keep reading, it's very interesting, but please add those important character set ups
Thank you for the suggestion! Actually, I haven't described it much because it will be focused on Volume 3.
do you mean the description of the main character or the college ? because it's difficult for readers to enjoy a story if they just feel like they're reading words and not visualizing anything ..
Both, but I'll give a brief description about it if it helps the readers stay motivated to read it. Thank you!
