Sapphire_Ace

right I saw that you can add characters on here

honestly I've edited this thing so many times over the years and it's just little things like that I need another set of eyes for!

oh okay 👌 one person mentioned I repeated the same words a lot 🥴

Which words were repeated where exactly, that would be helpful to know.

The story has very vivid imagery, is a decent story about reincarnation and Gods

wow 😂

Hello Author,The book is super intriguing. I am enjoying reading it! Anyways, my minor criticisms were, the name of the story is kind of less catchy or interesting, and another thing was that I cannot exactly tell what your characters look like.

was he imprisoned for being an emperor they wanted to overthrow

thank you, any criticisms? that would be super helpful

Hey so I was having difficulty reading this as it needs to be edited for some flow issues. You need to fix some of the grammar, the sentences tend to flow together. The quotations are confusing the way they are written too.