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thank you for commenting this I really appreciate it!! 😊 yes absolutely terrifying
thank you for the advice! the world is supposed to be post ww3, (well 100 years after this) 2157 suburban areas of Seattle, WA, in the United States of America.
i appreciate your advice, I am trying to edit it to make the pace faster!
thank you for your review, I appreciate it!
wow you forget your clothes you dang streaker
The story is a generic isekai litrpg progression fantasy. The character development is nonexistent. The main character is renamed something else, and his only personality trait is loving dragons? Like, why does he love dragons? What about his previous incarnation made him love them, even if they didn't exist for him before? Did a family member watch 'How to Train Your Dragon' with him? Did he watch Game of Thrones? What made him have such a father-like love for something that doesn't even exist in our world? Motivations are key in a good story, and your story entirely lacks them. The story development: I mean, it's okay, we just get thrown into a story where a guy dies, gets reincarnated, very quickly, no understanding of who he was before, and then gets to have a pet dragon. I also think it's cringe that he calls himself 'papa' to the dragon, but I digress. I will say the main 'system' in the story is pretty hilarious, and I like its wit. World building- generic, there are 7 kingdoms, and they are in 'Thornvale.'
like him having a dargon isn't just obvious
don't dooo it
sick joke*
even if just for a little while*