I am writing from a translator because English is not my native language. You can remove the garbage in the chapters at the beginning, it's very annoying, I'll add it to the library for now and wait ;)

Can you write it in English

Those who give low stars could be more explanatory or even recommend novels where they explain while explaining the point of view that is missing from this novel if possible please thank you for reading my novel it already makes me really happy that you think it's great good terrible or horrifying of course if the complaint is about grammatical spelling forget it i'm terrible so even if i copied a good work it would be bad hahahaha

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yo bro you writing about my country so I hope you ain't gonna cut it short now to make the story better the first thing Is regular punctuations separating the conversations or sentences you can first of all write it on a notebook and include the punctuations or give it to someone close to you who knows a lot about punctuations, I'm gonna try to comment frequently so that we can make the story better by the way you got me hooked when I saw the harem tag🤣 ashawo fc you can bang Nicki Minaj on the way🤣.one love bro🤍.

Thanks for the comment , normally I was not using punctuations in the conversations , apart from shouting , surprise and questions to make it more fluid , but with your comment I 'll try to add more punctuations , well it 's a pity that my story he 's going to leave the country he is in early . for not being able to adapt to the formation of the Toulouse team, so before leaving, would you like me to add a chapter regarding the trip with friends? again?