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DemonoidKing
DemonoidKingLv41yr
2023-07-11 06:31

It was good. The build up was good. the way that the mc used his knowledge and worked on himself and the women was really good. but now it's a op crack fic. the mc randomly got a template of goku or something in a normal world. basically young master chinese garbage

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Jack_Anarchy
Jack_AnarchyLv3

Does he really need that much power? Even though there are some supernatural but not that much as I know....

Otaku_Gamer_00007
Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4

Bro he Does not get Goku power, but Baki power that's also really strong but not that powerfull

DemonoidKing
DemonoidKingLv4

read later it literally says he chooses goku template

Otaku_Gamer_00007:Bro he Does not get Goku power, but Baki power that's also really strong but not that powerfull
Otaku_Gamer_00007
Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4

I have read 23 ch I know he has Baki powers not Goku or else he could just rule the planet Idiot

DemonoidKing:read later it literally says he chooses goku template
Otaku_Gamer_00007
Otaku_Gamer_00007Lv4

It's said goku like Build with Baki power

DemonoidKing:read later it literally says he chooses goku template
DemonoidKing
DemonoidKingLv4

blud that doesn’t change the fact that adding it was unecesary. there’s no need for it. he was building himself by working out. now he’s this mega chad that he doesn’t need to be. my opinion but that ruined the fic.

Otaku_Gamer_00007:It's said goku like Build with Baki power
Axton1
Axton1Lv4

Dude he already had maxed stats from the start the only thing working out was doing was beefing him up getting the goku like physique just matched his already busted stats to his body

DemonoidKing:blud that doesn’t change the fact that adding it was unecesary. there’s no need for it. he was building himself by working out. now he’s this mega chad that he doesn’t need to be. my opinion but that ruined the fic.
Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3

thing is, baki is literally capable of denting metal, that's something you see from an asgardian from marvel, not a human in a normal setting.

Axton1:Dude he already had maxed stats from the start the only thing working out was doing was beefing him up getting the goku like physique just matched his already busted stats to his body
DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14

very bad comparison, but got the point across.

Genn_stars:thing is, baki is literally capable of denting metal, that's something you see from an asgardian from marvel, not a human in a normal setting.
RegalObscure
RegalObscureLv4

A ff about summertime saga without lemon.

Sin_of_GREED
Sin_of_GREEDLv14

yep it's like making a date a Live or dxd ff with a single lead instead of harem.

RegalObscure:A ff about summertime saga without lemon.
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