Review Detail of CruelReality in Blazing eyes (Uchiha OCSI)
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The grammar and the story are lovely. The biggest issue I have is with how illogical the MC is. The MC is way weaker than he should be because he constantly is creating conflict between himself and his clan. If he simply pretended to be conpliant and utilized the clan library and training he could be comparable to itachi. Instead he outwardly and overtly insults everyone for no reason thus drastically weakening himself. He also seems to have no agency as he lets people he cares about die (shisui/Mikoto) and does not attempt to change anything. All this MC does is get in his own way and act depressed. Anyway, perhaps there is a chance for character development in the future, but thus far this story is only okay 5.8/10.
Blazing eyes (Uchiha OCSI)
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I haven't read this yet but I'd have to disagree about your opinion on bows. Bows and arrows are actually decent even in the naruto world. There are plenty of applications for bows. Arrow trajectory can be manipulated with wind style, improving accuracy and even power. Also, have you forgotten Sasuke's jutsu during the final battle, Indra's arrow? It was just a jutsu but other than naruto, I can't imagine any one else having an answer for it aside from DMS kakashi and the Otsutsukis or perhaps barely Minato
sean_robbins:don't forget the mc's obsession with the bow! it might sound interesting but when all high level people can practically dodge lighting or tank it, then a bow's speed and power r useless!!! even if he add's chakra to it, it would still be sub-par at best! unless the author nerf's everybody else it's kinda pointless!! let alone the fact that it's practically useless at short range!
don't forget the mc's obsession with the bow! it might sound interesting but when all high level people can practically dodge lighting or tank it, then a bow's speed and power r useless!!! even if he add's chakra to it, it would still be sub-par at best! unless the author nerf's everybody else it's kinda pointless!! let alone the fact that it's practically useless at short range!
i think there a difference between normal arrows and arrows made up of Susanoo chakra thats the size of sky scrapers!!! and it would be easier and more efficient to use different chakra natures to enhance shuriken and what not more then a bow... because unless he gets his hands on some kind of op bow made by the sage or at the very least one at the level of the 7 swords of the mist, then a regular enhanced throw with chakra can go the same or better speed and distance then the bow...
Jims_Rid:I haven't read this yet but I'd have to disagree about your opinion on bows. Bows and arrows are actually decent even in the naruto world. There are plenty of applications for bows. Arrow trajectory can be manipulated with wind style, improving accuracy and even power. Also, have you forgotten Sasuke's jutsu during the final battle, Indra's arrow? It was just a jutsu but other than naruto, I can't imagine any one else having an answer for it aside from DMS kakashi and the Otsutsukis or perhaps barely Minato