The grammar and the story are lovely. The biggest issue I have is with how illogical the MC is. The MC is way weaker than he should be because he constantly is creating conflict between himself and his clan. If he simply pretended to be conpliant and utilized the clan library and training he could be comparable to itachi. Instead he outwardly and overtly insults everyone for no reason thus drastically weakening himself. He also seems to have no agency as he lets people he cares about die (shisui/Mikoto) and does not attempt to change anything. All this MC does is get in his own way and act depressed. Anyway, perhaps there is a chance for character development in the future, but thus far this story is only okay 5.8/10.

The author in this one shows the Uchiha clan as absolute evil, and the Hokage as a white and fluffy rabbit, although in fact the Uchiha clan was in many ways unfairly suppressed by 3 Hokage and advisers

The fanfiction is completely illogical. mc, as mentioned in other comments, suppresses itself. at first the author says that mc is more talented than itachi, but at the same time he is much weaker than itachi. mc trained for years not to win, but to survive. Wow. as if the author is trying with all his might not to make the protagonist a steward, and thereby makes the story stupid. and here you will not find any battles or anything like that. this is a fanfic just about how mc creates problems for himself out of the blue, always stupid, but tries to seem smart, a little philosophy that doesn’t lead to anything special, in short, stupid fanfic under the wrapper “wow philosophy, I’ve never seen anything like that ". and as for illogicality, well, for example: jiraiya does not teach mc anything, because he is afraid that he will be like orochimaru, and at the same time, just before this line, he said that the main character is too kind and does not want to kill his enemies. further, his only friend was shisui, but he did nothing for him, did not help in any way, did not even want to. this fanfic is a complete disappointment, i was stupid while reading it

Two chapter review. Cuz only that many as of now. First chapter was very promising, but the second one has some red flags. First of all, describing a random girl genin? Typically in stories, if something is even remotely described about a person, he/she will be important. And since it's mentioned it's a girl, I fear that the author is in a rush to collect a harem or something, which would turn this into trash. Once again, this is just a red flag as of now, but this one tends to have a 95% prediction rate. Second of all, the simping for the third hokage. I'm not saying he has to be written as some evil mastermind like in some novels, but even then he is often, at the very least, incompetent.

just don't read it, it's a waste of time.

mc is older then itachi yet he can't prevent the killings simply dumb

Room temperature iq mc.... ........ . ....

I'm surprised to discover that there's a kind of illogical and ridiculous hatred of the uchiha clan in the fan fiction community. The main character is a sort of hateful spoiled brat, who alienates his extended family (his clan) for no reason other than his subjectivity and the anti-Uchiha bias he has. In this story, the third hokage is not the cynical, naive coward he actually was, but a sort of whitewashed grandpa and his clan is demonized.

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