Review Detail of femme_fatale in I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain
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The story is written really better than I imagined it to be considering the synopsis. I was captivated by the dialogue and the storyline! Keep up the great work author!
I Have Become a Capable Servant for the Villain
NewbieJimjim
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NewbieJimjim:Ok, I’m thankful for your feedback. I think I will rewrite the synopsis again : )
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Actually, the synopsis is good, but the conversation between Seraphine and Alice, which is not related to the story, may come off as a different thing for the readers. It slightly feels as if they(the characters) are promoting their own story. And anything different always has to face people's opinions, whether they like it or not. Anyways, this is what I think :)
NewbieJimjim:Do you think the synopsis is not ok? 😂😂😂. I want to hear from your opinion
NewbieJimjimAuthorNewbieJimjim
femme_fatale:Actually, the synopsis is good, but the conversation between Seraphine and Alice, which is not related to the story, may come off as a different thing for the readers. It slightly feels as if they(the characters) are promoting their own story. And anything different always has to face people's opinions, whether they like it or not. Anyways, this is what I think :)