Everything was very good, it was just some parts that went on telling instead of showing, and information dumps such as physics theories and mathematical calculations that nobody wants to know, which sometimes filled entire chapters that bothered me. But the story is very good from start to finish... The ending was very rushed and ended suddenly, that wasn't good... But what can you do? It's better this way than making an epilogue that ruins the whole story, like those that show years in the future with children and so on.
Baph0met
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