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Ryszol1mthPostedEverything was very good, it was just some parts that went on telling instead of showing, and information dumps such as physics theories and mathematical calculations that nobody wants to know, which sometimes filled entire chapters that bothered me. But the story is very good from start to finish... The ending was very rushed and ended suddenly, that wasn't good... But what can you do? It's better this way than making an epilogue that ruins the whole story, like those that show years in the future with children and so on.
- Ryszol1mthReplied to Drojam
Nooooo, epilogues showing years in the future are the worst. I don't want to know what happens in the future, I want to know how you got there! It's better to do an epilogue showing what happened immediately after that, and wrapping up the loose ends of the story. Leave their future to them, as Mark wants.
Ch 191 Chapter 191 - Ryszol1mthCommented
I was expecting at least one more arc resolving everything the weaver did, improving the lives of the spiders, with them celebrating their victory and the end of their ongoing misery... Resolving the outstanding issues left unresolved... Killing the remaining heir, young Karn... If you can make an arc like that, it would be very nice. Just please don't do something stupid like just telling what happened, or showing it out of the blue 5 years later, 10 years later... If you're going to do that, it's better to end it here.
Ch 191 Chapter 191 - Ryszol2mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Ryszol2mthReplied to DarkDemon_KING
He probably doesn't know anything about time and space either.
Subsequently, Mark retracted the suit. "Let me introduce myself. I'm Mark, the Space-Time Spider-Man." - Ryszol2mthCommented
Are you some kind of sadist? Why didn't you do it like this before?
Clad in his distinct red and blue Spider performance suit, Peter Parker kissed his girlfriend, Mary Ann Jane Watson, daughter of the circus ringmaster, gently before leaving, "I'll be right back, my sweetheart~" - Ryszol2mthCommented
What's the point of changing the shape of a story out of the blue? Something that a lot of people were expecting to happen, you decide to stop showing and tell? Would you rather see it happen or have someone tell you how it happened? Disappointed!
The meeting between Dr. Octopus Number One and Octavia was quite interesting. They were a male and female version of each other, both outstanding scientists, and immediately hit it off. This had everyone, including Mark, Gwen, and the Ultimate Spider-Man, thoroughly amused. - Ryszol2mthCommented
Space-time spiderman sounds like garbage!
So, perhaps at this moment, "Quantum Spider-Man" was more apt, yet far from satisfying as the title "Space-Time Spider-Man". - Ryszol2mthCommentedIn the lizard people community, kindness and concern for comrades were rare qualities. This made Gila feel somewhat fond of Poros.
- Ryszol2mthCommented
Poor guy, he has no idea that normal people can wipe them all out!
On the contrary, Monitor rather appreciated Boroz. He belonged to the stronger group of lizard people, even stronger than his brother Gecko. This could become an asset for the future of the Lizard People's kingdom. Therefore, he tolerated Boroz. - Ryszol2mthReplied to Rigchel
Who knows if they exist somewhere? Having escaped their "responsibilities"?
Mark nodded, "For ordinary people, yes." He didn't mention that for people like them who could traverse worlds at will, time and life didn't have as significant an impact. Characters like the Ancient One from the MCU had effectively achieved immortality. - Ryszol2mthReplied to Prehistoric_Wolf
Rumor has it that some interdimensional gates have been opened or closed. I don't know, but this fits in with something absurdly important that we'll probably never know exactly how or why.
Their most well-known achievements were their accurate predictions. First, they predicted their own decline. Second, they foresaw the existence of advanced technology in our era, such as planes and cars. Third, they predicted the emergence of a world-threatening figure in our time, which we will just refer as the "Mustache." Fourth, they predicted a catastrophic global war, specifying its time, frequency, and duration. Fifth, they suggested that something significant would occur after December 21, 2012, following the setting of the sun. - Ryszol2mthCommented
Dear author, you haven't abandoned this story, have you? This is my favorite Spider-Man fic, I really hope you get back to releasing chapters!
Chapter 129 - Ryszol2mthCommented
The child inside us never dies.
Now, he was beginning to enjoy it. - Ryszol2mthCommented
Who cares about vishanti when the great weaver is in the background?
But Mark thought to himself, why should he suddenly start worshiping someone else when he could rely on himself? - Ryszol2mthCommented
It's one of the evil spiders!
"Uncle Osborn, do you know, when I killed Harry, he wasn't as tough as you!" - Ryszol2mthReplied to Clay_Champion
The guy just needs someone, bro
With friends like this, what more could you ask for? - Ryszol2mthCommented
This is true, but only because the jewels have no power outside their universes of origin.
In theory, the TVA had the authority to access every existing timeline and possessed the power to undo everything, erase entire timelines, or even directly erase someone's existence from history. The Infinity Stones, considered artifacts of immense power, were just common stones in the eyes of the Time Variance Authority. - Ryszol2mthCommented
You're wasting your time playing astronomer! They must have aged 4 years! He doesn't know what time is like there, since he's never been back to check.
"The Inheritors." Mark clenched his fist, never before yearning for power so intensely!