Review Detail of shannon_frankd in I Can Create Monsters And Customize Them

I was inspired by the writer's prose. I think his basic writing skills are excellent. I couldn't continue this after the first few chapters unfortunately. I felt like nothing happened at great length. I was reluctant to give up, because it is rare to encounter such good prose on this site. I think that there were a few too many cliches in the story, as well as a lack of conflict at the beginning. I think the focus is a little off as well. For instance, there was essentially nothing of the interaction between the MC ant 'fatty' that explains how they became friends. Zero details about the struggle to earn enough to avoid being evicted. Endless tedious discussion about the research into card masters, and trying to activate his card. Sadly boring stuff. Your English or your translator's English is to be commended though.