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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd1mth
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    Usually I would have given up on this story about now. I find this type tedious because the MC never encounters any surprises or difficulties. Thanks for the chapter. Good job so far.

    Ch 56 Just this one thing
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    Re: Apocalypse Online
    Fantasy · Shameless_Neet
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    Why would it terrify them when he is to stupid to follow up? He should finish them the same night.

    However, when their lord vanished without a trace, and Master Guan Pei Xuanjing continued to read and practice martial arts as usual in the observance, this undoubtedly terrified the Zhang family's elders. They immediately changed their strategy and, in order to prevent retaliation, dispatched many elite young members to leave to temporarily avoid the crisis.
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    The Sims: I Open the Immortal Path for All Beings
    Eastern · Autumn comes after night rain
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
    Commented

    Didn't he join the military?

    Song Jian did not know what would happen to those who revealed their player identities, but losing some freedom was inevitable. There might even be the establishment of a unique department specifically for recruiting players in the future.
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    I have an Apocalypse City
    Games · Hair fell out
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    Haven't you done this before?

    Watching Song Jian holding a torch and disappearing into the rocky passageway behind the village, a trace of a complex expression flickered across Village Chief Zola's face. Under the dim light, it seemed like a dark snake-like aura was nestled between his eyebrows.
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    I have an Apocalypse City
    Games · Hair fell out
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
    Commented

    I like that Song Jian still encounters decent people.

    Ch 447 Chapter 447: Level Ten Instance
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    I have an Apocalypse City
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    I feel like you are fishing for encouragement. I am going to give some. I think this is a surprising gem. I associate the type of title you have with boring gimmick stories. I guess this is a gimmick story, but with a surprising amount of insight and flavor to it. People are often looking for the same thing over and over when they are reading stories. Sometimes they are upset when they get something out of their comfort zone. I read a lot of junk. I have low tastes. I think most here do, but your story is a cut above average so far.

    [I don't understand why some readers keep saying that the main character can't get over copying songs. I clearly explained the situation earlier in the story. It's not that he doesn't want to, he just can't right now. Does the current web fiction environment suck that much? People just keep spraying without even reading the story. Fortunately, I've been writing for more than a decade and have excellent stress resistance. Otherwise, a newcomer might indeed explode. The main character will, of course, climb the technology tree, but it might not be the way everyone likes. Just becoming a super-invincible genius right from the start. There are still many web novels with overpowered main characters armed with black technology, so why can't they get past the hurdle with me?]
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    I Really Didn't Mean To Be The Saviour Of The World
    Sci-fi · Objects in Fire
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    I'm giving this story a very high rating. I think it gets better as you go along. I found the early chapters less interesting than the later ones which is unusual. The MC is decent and his philosophy is pretty nice. The world is pretty crazy, and just getting good after a couple of hundred chapters.

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    Constructing-Style Wizard
    Games · Books Cooked By Hearts
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    Yeah I can see complaining about this, but it's pretty reasonable. Why should the sect let people in and get benefits for nothing? If there is no benefit to the sect for letting in disciples why would they have them? The kind of sect that gives stuff to disciples without getting anything in return makes no sense.

    ''What a joke. The sect has helped nurture the disciples? Everyone has to work to get any sect points in the 'floating cloud city'. It's thanks to the sect that she managed to come here? Yes, she had to risk her life whether she agreed or not as the sect forced her. You are not stealing from her? A fair trade you say? She is clearly being forced to trade whether she agrees or not. So this is the true face of the 'floating cloud sect' then!?''
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    Monarch of Time
    Eastern · ZeusTheOlympian
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd2mth
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    I've thought many of his decisions to be dumb. This is definitely the dumbest. This imp gains powers from everything it eats. Even if it doesn't kill them or get to eat the whole thing. The area around the city has the biggest smorgasbord of corpses and dying creatures anyone has ever seen. He should give it a bite out of everyone in his command including himself, and his echos/shadows. Making sure it gets to eat a finger bone from himself. Then take it on a tour of the battlefield including such notable corpses as itself, (the beetles wont have eaten the bone armor) and Goliath its stone skin at least is available. But there are thousands more to eat and with 5 shadows on it and Saint guarding it, the imp can probably swim through the loose dirt to eat corpse after corpse and victim after victim, including the human awakened.

    'Later. Now is not a good time.'
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd3mth
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    I was inspired by the writer's prose. I think his basic writing skills are excellent. I couldn't continue this after the first few chapters unfortunately. I felt like nothing happened at great length. I was reluctant to give up, because it is rare to encounter such good prose on this site. I think that there were a few too many cliches in the story, as well as a lack of conflict at the beginning. I think the focus is a little off as well. For instance, there was essentially nothing of the interaction between the MC ant 'fatty' that explains how they became friends. Zero details about the struggle to earn enough to avoid being evicted. Endless tedious discussion about the research into card masters, and trying to activate his card. Sadly boring stuff. Your English or your translator's English is to be commended though.

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    I Can Create Monsters And Customize Them
    Fantasy · MadScythe
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd3mth
    Commented

    That's going to make it hard to keep the government from realizing he is a player.

    "Level Glory Board?" Song Jian paused and, after a moment's hesitation, chose to publish his information.
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    I have an Apocalypse City
    Games · Hair fell out
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd3mth
    Commented

    Song is simply being stupid not planning to go back there right away. There obviously would be lots of good stuff even without monsters to grind on.

    "Of course, giants like them, even during an apocalypse, wouldn't disappear that quick. Moreover, I used to suspect that the zombie virus that destroyed this city originally spread from Zeus Shield Company, but I have no evidence to prove this..."
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    I have an Apocalypse City
    Games · Hair fell out
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd3mth
    Commented

    I think you mean 9.9%. 99.9% would mean those 10K machines cost 10 coins.

    "How about it? These are herb gathering robots, equipped with a level eight Medicine Gathering skill, suitable for any terrain. Even if the herbs are growing on a cliff face, they can collect them." Canaan bragged, "It only costs ten thousand Doomsday Coins each, and if you need it, I can give you a discount of 99.9%!"
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    I have an Apocalypse City
    Games · Hair fell out
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd4mth
    Commented

    🤣

    'Serves you right, bastard…'
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd5mth
    Commented

    Shouldn't Sunny have to say he has blackmail material on me?

    "He just gives me the creeps."
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd6mth
    Commented

    He should kill them for the reward.

    And it went beyond just having their brains sliced open with tubes in them, Cole could see metal creeping up different sides of their bodies like veins, twisting and changing them into the abominations he just finished fighting. The curve ball however was that most of them were players.
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    Titan Rising Online: World Breaker
    Games · Anone
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd9mth
    Commented

    Now he's reminding me of the Martian Manhunter.

    At that moment, Luke didn't look human at all, but more like… a noodle that had come alive?
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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd9mth
    Commented

    He's really getting dumb. Throwing Lex Luthor into his research space is a harvest like winning Superman's friendship.

    A month later, Lex would die unexpectedly, for example by jumping off a tall building or charging at a speeding truck.
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    Super Detective in the Fictional World
    Sci-fi · Icy Plain's Three Elegance
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd10mth
    Replied to Vernable_Reviewer

    And the batteries die in a matter of days.

    It felt like he had almost run a marathon the day before and was slowly recovering, a familiar feeling for Zain since he had once attempted a marathon run to test his limits. After all, if one were in an apocalypse situation where vehicles didn't exactly work, they would need to run.
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    Level up Zombie
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • shannon_frankd
    shannon_frankd1yr
    Replied to EvilLoynis

    I guess he wants to leave some money for the burial.

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    Universal Power System
    Fantasy · KingU
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