The grammar is decent and I absolutely love the premise. However, what makes this difficult to read is mainly the mentality of the MC but also the system. I’ll cover the system first, essentially, the issue with it is that the percentages do not make sense. 45% progress for chakra is only the chunin level, and similarly other percentages are far far far too weak and do not reflect the MCs skill properly. Regarding the MC, he is, to put it simply, a pathetic moron that is skirting by on his privilege from the system and his birth situation. He wastes years not training swordsmanship, chakra control, or actually sparring for no reason at all. He still has not started practicing anytging to do with fire even though he is familiar enough with naruto to know about the exercise where you practice burning a leaf. Heck, he could ask his mom to give him a d rank fire jutsu or just experiment with trying to control fire… Basically, there is a two fold nerf: 1)the system percentages are weak relative to the template target. 2)the mc does nothing to speed up his process beyond the usual path of a ninja, his template is the only reason he is strong at all. Anyway, I hate to see a cool concept ran into the ground but I don’t want to read a slice of life about some moronic lucky POS skirting by bumbling through life based on his template. 4.2/10, the flaws run this story into the ground.

If the author is to lazy to write a proper synopsis I am to lazy to read the fic. I don't say that to be mean, but come on, I just want to know the basic before I put my time into reading this. Your synopsis just say that the MC transmigrate (or something similar) to the Naruto world. Well, by the disclaimer including Bleach and by the name of the fic I have a idea of his special power, but I can be wrong.

My biggest problem with this fic is the usage of original characters. I don't understand why authors use oc characters when there are so many charcters already available in the universe to be used. In this fic the author says he is using them as a practice for when he makes his own novel which i understand but already existing characters can also be used as practice too. I would say the writing quality is good and so is the grammer but I can't stand oc specially in a world like naruto where there are tons of character, Honestly if the author wanted to use a lot of oc charcters then he should have set the time period to the warring states.

A interesting story, good premise and the template works in good way which is a nice change of pace from what happens in other works. But chapter 16 - 18 were to jarring, the MC makes decisions that contradicts his entire personality for some reason, forced plot comes to mind but theses actions were mostly without reason and consequence which makes it weirder. Author, good luck with the story

it's a really good fanfiction. A lot of people don't like how dumb the main character is sometimes, but imagine you woke up and gain access to a huge amount of power, most people would lose a bunch of brain cells and let the power get to their heads. the author has done a good job at using that aspect towards the character's development and I think that's great. Over all a well written fan fic without any huge grammatical mistakes. Good plot development as it's not just a copy paste of the cannon, and in my opinion really good character development.Hopefully the author keeps up with the current quality of chapters and maintains a consistent update schedule as I have really high hopes for this fan fictionKeep up the good work author!!!

I love the writing. The author has good potential. Unfortunately, they suck at power scaling. MC grows too fast. Should have awakened Shikai during the time skip after Sasuke leaves the village as an incomplete technique he develops. Bankai could have been the "completed" version he manages to master during the fourth ninja war against Madara or something. Just like how Sai masters the "Sealing Technique: Tiger Vision Staring Bullet" mid-combat under pressure. Decent read I guess, but a bit unsatisfactory.

Good...............^1234567891011121314151617181920212223242526272829303132333435363738394041424344454647484950^、、、、、、、、、、、 I like how the story develops

perfect of all sidessit read and enjoy ...just like that🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I liked the story, but the system doesn't really make sense, because it doesn't follow any rules. My suggestion is to just explain how it works or should work. It feels like you are just pulling s*** out of your a** whenever mc receives a new skill/power.

well love the powers of the mc keep doing a good job author👍👍