My biggest problem with this fic is the usage of original characters. I don't understand why authors use oc characters when there are so many charcters already available in the universe to be used. In this fic the author says he is using them as a practice for when he makes his own novel which i understand but already existing characters can also be used as practice too. I would say the writing quality is good and so is the grammer but I can't stand oc specially in a world like naruto where there are tons of character, Honestly if the author wanted to use a lot of oc charcters then he should have set the time period to the warring states.
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The OC characters are great, the MC is the issue.
I don't think that's a good reason for a bad rating. I'll admit my story is pretty cringe at times. But you put a 2-star rating not for the faults of my story, which I can accept, but because you don't like OCs in Naruto? Isn't that just a personal preference?
I think its a valid criticism in a world like naruto were there are a lots of characters which can be used. And i though it was more of an issue that most of his interaction was with the ocs and not even the original cast of the show which made no sense to me. Again i would have been fine with oc if this was a fanfic of a show with a lot less charcters shown like hunterxhunter or was in the warring state, but the fic is in the time period of naruto hence i didn't like the inclusion of ocs.
Palpable_Banana:I don't think that's a good reason for a bad rating. I'll admit my story is pretty cringe at times. But you put a 2-star rating not for the faults of my story, which I can accept, but because you don't like OCs in Naruto? Isn't that just a personal preference?
no its not Lol
leo26:I think its a valid criticism in a world like naruto were there are a lots of characters which can be used. And i though it was more of an issue that most of his interaction was with the ocs and not even the original cast of the show which made no sense to me. Again i would have been fine with oc if this was a fanfic of a show with a lot less charcters shown like hunterxhunter or was in the warring state, but the fic is in the time period of naruto hence i didn't like the inclusion of ocs.
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Vidhan_Bhardwaj:no its not Lolimage
OC's are another form of author taking liberties with the given plot that's what a Fanfic is all about an Author's approach to an already established plot
_Bruh:explain
there is no need for an excessive number of OCs in a world with 100s of unexplored characters the author can use. we came to read fanfics, the author's spin on a work. we didn't come to read original fiction with plots completely unrelated to the main story that just so happens to use the original story's power system
Vidhan_Bhardwaj:OC's are another form of author taking liberties with the given plot that's what a Fanfic is all about an Author's approach to an already established plot
Mind you, I'm talking as someone who hasn't read this. The number of OCs could be few and their presence could be actually contributing something meaningful to the plot. I'm just not a fan of too many OCs in general.
Vidhan_Bhardwaj:OC's are another form of author taking liberties with the given plot that's what a Fanfic is all about an Author's approach to an already established plot
