Item: New life with a sci-fi system
Rating: 4
Author: Andrew_maconha

Andrew_maconhaLv36mth

2024-10-18 11:32

The story is good and very entertaining, but for me the writing style is horrible,usually the protagonist speaks and then out of nowhere comes "Random A:....." I think this way of writing is horrible because the contextualization goes to hell and there is very little about the other characters

New life with a sci-fi system

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