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ReaderCatLv21yr
2024-03-23 04:35

First of all there was no Synopsis to encourage me to start reading and I couldn't find a good, descriptive review so I will do it. The story is very easy to read and the narration is very fluid. the progression and the way the MC influences the people around him is quite nice. but there is one thing I don't understand. What is the MC's purpose, what exactly does he want to do? Harem? not really. everyone he summons is female and loyal to him (so far: chapter 80), so he could easily set up a harem. world domination? no, from what I can tell from MC's personality he wouldn't find it worth the effort and he seems to be using his talk about "God emperor" as just a cover for his behavior. socially high status? he can easily become rich and high level by developing technology without engaging in the risky behavior he does. so the only problem i see is i don't know what the mc wants, that's ok since it's episode 80, but as long as the story keeps growing it can't go this way, the mc urgently needs a character development. (btw i use deepL when writing comments because my english grammar is not good. if it makes me write something incomprehensible or illogical, ignore it)

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This was good, but the chapters are way too short. Also, redflag of a harem. It started fine, but it's only interactions with female characters over and over again. Story got stale really fast. Also I never like character summons as a system function.

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Ashinydecapod
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This is so good, the story flows with out feeling off. I really like the MC's personality it feels fresh and even though I'm not really into harem this one was written good without feeling force. highly recommended.

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very good novel . would be better to have 500 more chapters to read ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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It takes a long month to find a gem in this location The fact that I have to twist and turn to find a beautiful and interesting story makes me much prefer it

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