Item: One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!
Rating: 3
Author: Dark_Crow_Dao

Dark_Crow_DaoLv141yr

2023-09-10 05:31

the story and concept is interesting, but bad execution, we follow the same path as One Piece with the MC (Luffy), and even if he had enough time to become powerful since he has been training since he was 7 years old with a system and a powerful master but always remains weak and the worst is that he had the opportunity to learn HAKI but he did not want to learn it because it is very boring and he wanted to train techniques that are useless (he gets beaten up by the admirals), honestly i am very disappointed, and now all the crew becomes girls (gender bender), I had high expectations but it's just another Fan Fic that follows the whole process of the manga.

One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!

some_writer

4.2

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miz7nLv2

Yeah but it's no fun if he's op.

10mth

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Golden_dragoonLv4

Looks good.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr

Dark_PersonJJLv4

Cool Story. I realy like how Luffy is progressing already. Gyatsu and Garp trening him together.? I just hope he will not let Nami act like she is captain how OG Luffy did. Many times she was going to far and should keep her lips shut and know her place. She is Hot and all but it do not give her right to act like she is the smartest person on the planet and that she can be wrong sometimes.

1yr

mutekishifuLv5

I am obliged to give this note as a sign of revolt. it's a smarter luffy with a lot of nerf and gender switching a fun read, like 3.5 or 4 stars. because I gave 1 star, if I made a list of it, it would be endless and boring, but I'll give you an example ... Calisthenics maximum level ... 300kg. My revolt is okay to nerf but that's an exaggeration. it's like I'm going to give MC the one for all of boku no hero ... after 10 years of training he reaches the supreme level ... 300kg of strength ... like world weightlifting champion Geórgio Lasha Talakhadze lifts 470kg . .. to the author if you read this, man you are in one piece world... the world of white beard that according to the author (Eiichiro Oda), is on the same level as super sayajin 1 (young white beard) from dragon ball . reading this fanfic i feel the author is an idiot or he is saying i the reader is an idiot.

1yr

YoungMonarchLv14

good that you write what you want i hope it will be as good as your other ff

1yr

Drako_0692Lv1

Well, the system is a waste of time, the story is copy and paste with subtle personality changes and powers that are not worth it, the protagonist is a soup of powers when he already had his own op powers anyway nice try

1yr

bythgrLv14

Pretty good but author decides to ruin it by genderbending the best characters all for the sake of harem not for me.

1yr

LizrockLv4

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1yr

Shujinko_JoseiLv12

I don't get it how can you get the idea of writing this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮‍💨. The plot story is only interesting before Luffy sets sail. Characters gender-bender is not a problem but their personality and names ruined it 👎. Since you've turned them into women, you've had to make their personalities more feminine, and their names had to change too. The plot story is another thing that you barely change. 😕 Do you know how I feel when read this ff book? It's "One Piece all over again", I rather watch One Piece anime than read this copy-paste product. 😮‍💨😠

1yr

EnciridionLv4

Another fan fiction by you. Can't wait to read this and see what's going to happen and how Luffy will develop as the story progresses. I already know It's gonna be a good one.

1yr

AlchemistLv13

Harem trash with genderbent characters and unnecessary crossover characters. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

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