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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv41yr
2023-07-01 00:45

Cool Story. I realy like how Luffy is progressing already. Gyatsu and Garp trening him together.? I just hope he will not let Nami act like she is captain how OG Luffy did. Many times she was going to far and should keep her lips shut and know her place. She is Hot and all but it do not give her right to act like she is the smartest person on the planet and that she can be wrong sometimes.

One Piece: I Will Become The Pirate King!!

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DisappointingMyBoy
DisappointingMyBoyLv1

She was smart tho (at least more than luffy ). Although i wholeheartedly agree with the *hot* part...

1yr
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Daoist66W4wt
Daoist66W4wtLv14

No Romance tag?

1yr
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Dimdabb60
Dimdabb60Lv14

Second that thought.

1yr
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scarletking001
scarletking001Lv15

Is it good ?

1yr
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

It realy depends if you like Genderbend.

scarletking001:Is it good ?
1yr
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scarletking001
scarletking001Lv15

I Hate genderbend but at least is it good read or just like the issei one 🤷‍♂️

Dark_PersonJJ:It realy depends if you like Genderbend.
1yr
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Fem Ace, Fem Zoro, Fem Sanji, those are characters who are genderbended.And noa this Luffy is not like Issei if this is what you asking. You should give it a try at least. I put many pics hare to.

scarletking001:I Hate genderbend but at least is it good read or just like the issei one 🤷‍♂️
1yr
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scarletking001
scarletking001Lv15

Ok thanks i will give it a try just to see those pics 😎😁

Dark_PersonJJ:Fem Ace, Fem Zoro, Fem Sanji, those are characters who are genderbended.And noa this Luffy is not like Issei if this is what you asking. You should give it a try at least. I put many pics hare to.
1yr
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Koty_Meade
Koty_MeadeLv14

Luffe know that he’s not the smartest and Nami is smart and she always listens to what he says and luffe is the kind of person to listen to he’s friends and she most of the time has good insight

1yr
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Mart_Villanueva
Mart_VillanuevaLv1

well that's how girls

1yr
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HiroReaper
HiroReaperLv3

dude this is sounding pretty misogynistic

1yr
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Hunter_69
Hunter_69Lv13

Retard...Then according to your logic, og Nami is a misandrist?

HiroReaper:dude this is sounding pretty misogynistic
1yr
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Ixtabb
IxtabbLv4

Really ??? 🤦

HiroReaper:dude this is sounding pretty misogynistic
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Golden_dragoon
Golden_dragoonLv4

Looks good.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

1yr

mutekishifu
mutekishifuLv5

I am obliged to give this note as a sign of revolt. it's a smarter luffy with a lot of nerf and gender switching a fun read, like 3.5 or 4 stars. because I gave 1 star, if I made a list of it, it would be endless and boring, but I'll give you an example ... Calisthenics maximum level ... 300kg. My revolt is okay to nerf but that's an exaggeration. it's like I'm going to give MC the one for all of boku no hero ... after 10 years of training he reaches the supreme level ... 300kg of strength ... like world weightlifting champion Geórgio Lasha Talakhadze lifts 470kg . .. to the author if you read this, man you are in one piece world... the world of white beard that according to the author (Eiichiro Oda), is on the same level as super sayajin 1 (young white beard) from dragon ball . reading this fanfic i feel the author is an idiot or he is saying i the reader is an idiot.

1yr
YoungMonarch
YoungMonarchLv14

good that you write what you want i hope it will be as good as your other ff

1yr
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

Well, the system is a waste of time, the story is copy and paste with subtle personality changes and powers that are not worth it, the protagonist is a soup of powers when he already had his own op powers anyway nice try

1yr
bythgr
bythgrLv14

Pretty good but author decides to ruin it by genderbending the best characters all for the sake of harem not for me.

1yr
Lizrock
LizrockLv4

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1yr
Shujinko_Josei
Shujinko_JoseiLv12

I don't get it how can you get the idea of writing this One Piece fanfic in the first place 😮‍💨. The plot story is only interesting before Luffy sets sail. Characters gender-bender is not a problem but their personality and names ruined it 👎. Since you've turned them into women, you've had to make their personalities more feminine, and their names had to change too. The plot story is another thing that you barely change. 😕 Do you know how I feel when read this ff book? It's "One Piece all over again", I rather watch One Piece anime than read this copy-paste product. 😮‍💨😠

1yr
Enciridion
EnciridionLv10

Another fan fiction by you. Can't wait to read this and see what's going to happen and how Luffy will develop as the story progresses. I already know It's gonna be a good one.

1yr
Alchemist
AlchemistLv13

Harem trash with genderbent characters and unnecessary crossover characters. 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

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