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2024-01-15 04:08

I love your multi-fic world building, I just hate your character, he seems so one dimensional at times. He just has this mary sue type of nice harem guy personality.(Giving gifts to people) The fact that you used regression type cheat, is detrimental to the character. I love it when characters uses science and technology to make up the gap of their talent especially when it was shown he struggles alot with beings even with his advanced technology. But now nobu has grown way way too strong(possibly near creator class), there's not a same sense of danger anymore despite the new enemy being very dangerous. I hope the new arcs introduce new threats, because current Nobu solos the verse except that one entity. (Index and honkai should give him a challenge if you decide to add that.)

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IdleYoungMaster
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First of all, thanks for the review. I did notice MC being like that (him being 1D "at times") after your review pointed it out. It was supposed to be a part of his "character" for his first life (I won't be putting up a spoiler). If we'll look at his personality, he did act like that in the canon FGO. Though, it could feel like that if more time had passed in this fic. As for the threats, there are several of them planned. And yes, I (finally) decided on adding Honkai to this fic. As to which part of this fic it would appear, we'll have to see on the further chapters ;)

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