Review Detail of aswsok in Fairy Tail: Master Dragneel

Character developments definitely needs time, it’s not instant. I’m mainly focused on Natsu right now. And I think I did a pretty good job on world building, unless you skimmed through the chapters. I explored the guild rankings which wasn’t explored much in canon. I expanded the relationship between guild masters and magic council and how they operate which wasnt explained properly in the canon. I introduced the political situations of Ishgar, which again was not touched in the canon. I even added the council’s relationships with the kingdoms and how they could destabilize a country if it threatens their regime. geopolitics, Economics, i introduce them in this fanfic where they werent touched in the canon. so i think you just skimmed through chapters without understanding what i wrote. I just think its unfair to give me this rating when you did not even try to understand anything. also if you’re looking for character development and world building, then dont complain that it takes too long. you are contradicting yourself. You wanted the tenrou to appear so they can react to adult natsu, so you complain that world building take too long. but then you complain that you havent seen any character development or world building ...bro what? As for the reference, its actually reference to Timy Turners fairies Wanda and Cosmos, the piettro was just a coincidence. Anyway, i am sure you are a respectful and understanding person, but i think you need to at least take some time to understand the story

Reviewer stated you basically went waaaaaay too in-depth. I mean sure, it's interesting I suppose, but we came to read a story, not a book on imaginary politics.