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Even if she isn't at the workshop, the top echelon of the guild is and can reach him in real life.
huh I always thought of chloe too
a magic circle is a magic circle... runes, squiggles, geometric shapes... don't think there's anything novel about what she sees
Kinda weird to not just stick to one system of classification
honestly I prefer the more detailed approach your other DxD fics took. Such a long timeskip, while adding a bunch of characters with only a few lines... eh. Still, with how often you've rewritten your old ones, I can get how having to focus on the same arcs again and again can be annoying beyond belief lol. Also, will the focus of this fic lie more on multiversal exploration than the others? Sure near the end they all started ranging out, but you keep running out of steam not long after. Perhaps by speeding through DxD we'll get more of that?
thought you were going to have him just be a demon? You really can't pretend he isn't a good deal werewolf by now :p
I liked the potential she had in that story, but tbh she didn't have all that much screentime.
Do you mean Georg?
Inari is either depicted as a young woman, or an old man, but still surprised you made him male lol.
Yet due to your lack of mentioning her at all in the prologue chapters, she's just an unimportant rando OC to us.
Calling something an AU doesn't magically excuse bad and lazy writing. Especially in a story that up till this point has basically all been summaries.
You're not giving any details, so if you use it anytime in the future story, its still going to feel like a deus ex machina cheat. If you had actually described the method here, it would have been different.
the Salarian ex-spy just accepts the miracle drug formula a rando human hands him, no questions asked, and together they go on to do some medical wizardry that undoubtedly countless people have tried and failed to do over the course of centuries.
look up Krogan art once again, because it just doesn't. make. any. sense. He has no biotics to augment his strength, so he has absolutely no business learning cqc from Wrex. Wrex isn't a master martial artist who knows the best ways how to use his HUMAN body to apply and redirect force. Biotics is a major part of his fighting style, as is charging in head first, ignoring damage due to his regeneration and redundant organs letting him survive such a way of fighting. Shepard, an N7, the elite of the elite of the ELITE human combatants would be an infinitely better choice to teach him how to fight.
Without Biotics of his own ...?
which only works because of their ridiculous biology