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Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author1yr
2023-06-22 20:32

Pft! Of course I was going to leave a shameless review. I do want my book to get enough exposure afterall. That being said though, this is my very first book and I would be super grateful if you all could support me and help to make this story better. I also urge you to point out any flaws, plot holes and anything you find odd about the novel. Your feedback really will go a long way. Criticism is nice and all but do not break my fickle heart. I beg of you. Constructive criticism will be very much appreciated though. That's all from this shameless author! Hope you enjoy the book!

Extra And MC

Caeruleum_
4.7
217 Chs

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King_Of_Heros
King_Of_HerosLv4

is it harem? or not

1yr
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Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

Nope. No harems here good sire.

King_Of_Heros:is it harem? or not
1yr
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King_Of_Heros
King_Of_HerosLv4

I appreciate it.

Caeruleum_:Nope. No harems here good sire.
1yr
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King_Of_Heros
King_Of_HerosLv4

a fellow disciple of *no harem sect.

Caeruleum_:Nope. No harems here good sire.
1yr
24
Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

Definitely!

King_Of_Heros:a fellow disciple of *no harem sect.
1yr
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Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Are they gay I hope not

Caeruleum_:Definitely!
1yr
4
Pendulum_
Pendulum_Lv13

What an outrageous sect

King_Of_Heros:a fellow disciple of *no harem sect.
1yr
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Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

Pendulum_:What an outrageous sect
1yr
23
Hunter101Bomber
Hunter101BomberLv15

is this a boys love story?

1yr
1
Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

Nope.

Hunter101Bomber:is this a boys love story?
1yr
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

Caeruleum_:Nope.
1yr
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Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13

do you intend to continue this cuz many author drop after some time.

1yr
1
Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

I think the updates might slow down after a while but I'll keep writing. I'm really just enjoying the feeling of writing my own novel.

Deadly_Healer:do you intend to continue this cuz many author drop after some time.
1yr
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Deadly_Healer
Deadly_HealerLv13

not bad and I'll enjoy your novel.

Caeruleum_:I think the updates might slow down after a while but I'll keep writing. I'm really just enjoying the feeling of writing my own novel.
1yr
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Extra_1578
Extra_1578Lv4

It’s nice to meet a fellow memb er

Caeruleum_:Definitely!
1yr
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aniket_keer
aniket_keerLv4

I have been following your novel for quite some time but i noticed that even after getting so many views, your novel has not contracted, I am just asking as a fellow auther, did you not get a contract or have you not requested a contract yet ?

1yr
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Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

I've actually been contracted but I'm just not ready to lock the chapters yet I guess.😅

aniket_keer:I have been following your novel for quite some time but i noticed that even after getting so many views, your novel has not contracted, I am just asking as a fellow auther, did you not get a contract or have you not requested a contract yet ?
1yr
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Neon_SsX
Neon_SsXLv15

Is there romance?

1yr
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MoonRain
MoonRainLv12

Is there gonna be romance involving either one of the men with a girl? Like, is one or both of the Male leads gonna get a lover?

1yr
Caeruleum_
Caeruleum_Author

They each have their own respective love interest

MoonRain:Is there gonna be romance involving either one of the men with a girl? Like, is one or both of the Male leads gonna get a lover?
1yr
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KanTakeAHint
KanTakeAHintLv12

After reading all the chapter in this novel, i only have one thing to say

1yr

Zurbluris
ZurblurisLv14

Its nice to see another author from Nigeria here, the novel looks like one that will be amazing too

1yr
DaoistxjmnAv
DaoistxjmnAvLv4

you should mention who is speaking it's kinda confusing but looks promising

1yr
ItzWaqaz
ItzWaqazLv13

this one is a good novel and has good storyline just dont discontinue this work because this is my favorite ...... we are waiting for new chapters

1yr
SHiRa155
SHiRa155Lv4

Good, good. A good novel little duckling. Keep going, i really like the concept of two mc.

1yr
David_Hughes_9017
David_Hughes_9017Lv15

An absolutely amazing novel. loved it start to finish. Highly recommend

9mth
Yazukoto
YazukotoLv15

Alrighty! As promised I will leave a review! I’m sorry it took so long T-T please don’t make a character named Jason and kill him brutally for revenge! Overall: This is an amazing novel. I’m shocked that the author was able to focus on both mc equally and make us love both of them. I have nothing to say in this regard besides I love it. World building: the author goes in depth to where I can literally imagine what’s they’re explaining. I would love if there was a picture in some instances tbh cause some times my imagination goes wonky and I’ll imagine crazy things. Grammar: I don’t see much issues tbh. It’s a very enjoyable reading. Spoilers down below Cons: I NEED MORE FLUFFY MOMENTS WITH THE LOVERS! Also now that they’re getting ranked up more I hope you don’t put the adults and parents to the side. I would personally love to see the parents swoop in and save them if things were going bad for the mcs. Like when they were younger and the dad stomped the guy for trying to kill his son. I need more of that. Give them some screen time and make them feel more useful please. I wanna see the parents also be of help rather than just using authority or having one moment of action.

1yr
ItzWaqaz
ItzWaqazLv13

glad i came to know of this piece .[img=update]

1yr
WorldLegacy
WorldLegacyLv1

The book cover is stunning! Looks promising too. Wish that there would be more clarity on who is speaking, but otherwise, pretty good start.

1yr
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