Review Detail of Matrino2 in Free-zing

Item: Free-zing
Rating: 4.6

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Matrino2Lv26mthMatrino2

The concept is good, I like it. You just need to improve on your writing. Your story has potential. Just keep writing and you'll see improvement. And also read similar books to the one you're writing. Use AI like bard to also help you if you cant afford an editor !

Free-zing

Reshoph

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Matrino2Lv2Matrino2

Anytime, Happy for you that you started. Keep writing, cant wait for chapter 4 !

Reshoph:Thanks for your advice matrino....I will see if I can improve my writing. Thanks for reviewing and giving me advice to improve. I will try my best.

6mth

ReshophAuthorReshoph

Thanks for your advice matrino....I will see if I can improve my writing. Thanks for reviewing and giving me advice to improve. I will try my best.

6mth