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Unpaid_FoxGod
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I believe that this story is too slow for its own good. Rather, it's hurting itself with how slow paced it is.

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Naruto : Pure Blood

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Luk_72634
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What I can say about the story is that you took away the essence of most of the characters, an example of that would be what you did with Hinata, I can assure you that you don't like Hinata, what you like about her is her body or something like that because of personality nothing, not even the Hinata From Road to Ninja is as unpleasant as this

Devils_hand:nah bro, just have some patience and it will pick up the speed,
Devils_hand
Devils_handAuthorDevils_hand

nah bro, just have some patience and it will pick up the speed,

Monsieur_Dreamer
Monsieur_DreamerLv3Monsieur_Dreamer

Well said.

Luk_72634:What I can say about the story is that you took away the essence of most of the characters, an example of that would be what you did with Hinata, I can assure you that you don't like Hinata, what you like about her is her body or something like that because of personality nothing, not even the Hinata From Road to Ninja is as unpleasant as this