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Gadloner
GadlonerLv51yr
2023-12-15 17:06

You should edit the chapters and make the first letter of the sentence a big letter.It's hard to even rate this properly because it's hard to read and it makes my eyes ache.

Multiverse Hunter Guild

Enima_gaming
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thanks bro

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JoelLude
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Just another system fic. I have come to despise them. It's take all the fun out off character development and give power to cheaply and without effort.

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Jackleell
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the first sentence of this novel [Inside a small but luxurious bedroom, there is a handsome boy who has just awakened.]Now, you will understand how this novel will be. It's just a translated novel, and the grammar is written in a way that resembles how Chinese is translated into English, which is disappointing."

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SomeLordsBastard
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This novel desperately needs an editor. The number of run on sentences are annoying as hell. I was quite excited to read this at first from the premise but once I got into it I couldn't continue reading.

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this is shameless author, please give your suggestions and criticsas long as it will make my story better i'll take all your critics

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