Bad just bad. Don't read this at all. First the pov shifts around so much it just doesn't make sense anymore. Second half the chapter for each chapter is about the author thoughts about the novel. Third the book is written like a rough draft of a script for a play or movie. Fourth word count, the way the novel written is for word count. 5 there's really no plot or story focus, if there is it's unnoticeable. 6 The start is weird, I didn't even understand it, the novel make you the reader think really hard to figure out what the mc is. From what I understood is mc is a reincarnated from our world. If I am wrong about that then it's the authors fault. 7 The authors does improve a little bit though not enough to make a difference to the novel.
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