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Villain; Are you saying that my little brother is the protoganist?

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Note: Review stars does not reflect the rating I issued for this fanfic on Webnovel. Naturally I gave it a 5 across the board to bring the ratings up -> increase reader exposure and engagement -> prompt MTLer to up the update speed. Bear with me my fellow readers. Review//Ch31: Writing Quality: 2 STARS!! This reads like an MTL. The ‘translator’ has not taken much effort at all while copying the MTL onto here honestly. Okay, I’ll add one more star because pronouns are at least pretty consistent. 3 STARS :) I did notice it got significantly better readability-wise after Chap 15ish tbf. Update Stability: 5 STARS. 18 Chaps a week. You want more? I do haha. Translator, focus on this novel please! Story Devlopment: 4.8 STARS. Reads like I am the Fated Villain in a way… It’s got the classic xianxia events with the villainous twist. System is sound and reasonable. Author doesn’t give unfair in power ups to either MC or the Sons of Heaven which is nice! It means MC will have to scheme a little. I even like the fun way the novel starts… really… early on in life haha. It’s got some element of Chinese comedy which is refreshing. The author may have got inspiration from Fated Villain but that’s fine I think. And the Expulsion development… genuinely one of the best story developments I’ve read in a while. A spoiler but you’ll see what I mean haha. Character: 5.0 STARS! This is why you’re here! MC is a villain through and through. Though I have wondered whether he’s just an unreliable narrator and kind of Tsuntsun when it comes to his twin or if im imaging things but otherwise his actions have always been for his own benefit. Ruthless, Scheming, Shameless… come on, what more can y’all ask for here. I think he is capabale of some form of love: For now familial love can only slightly be seen… similar to Gu Changge though, I don’t think this guy will ever be capable of romantic love. But well, harem is the tag so there’ll certainly be several relationships. World development: 4.5 STARS. It’s strong. We’re thrown into a dynasty rebellion pretty early on and I’m sure the OG author will build on it going forward. Comments: Mr.Translator… please put a tad more effort into changing words here and there to make it more readable and less MTL-like. Happy reading everyone!

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