the story is unbelievably boring, the first arc was good but now in that other world everything was boring there is no plot advance, that torture of the supreme 5 was absurd, about 6 chapters lost in that meaningless torture, just kill them and Done, another important thing, the villain looks like a beta protagonist letting himself be commanded and manipulated by his women, another point is that the dialogues of his "harem" (only 2 women) are so flat that they seem robotic, anyway, I hope that this third arc is better written and adds more women to the harem and doesn't make their conversations so flat and robotic postscript: If you delete the review I will repost it
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Well many people were asking to let mc start torturing protagonist. So preparing for that. The dialogues are less and sometimes even meaningless I know because I have problems in letting interacting them. But I am working on it. The harem would be add in next arc. As for deleting your review why would I do that???
But yes I can't agree with the beta mc thing. I mean if he is listening to them, his harem. Then I don't think that this is called manipulated by his women and will be called beta. I think a beta mc is who listen to others women and almost all the beautiful women he had meet. So I wouldn't agree with that. But yes if I am wrong about it do tell me. Also I am open to all suggestions if you want you can give me your suggestion.
well it depends If you consider there opinion an make your own decisions then you aren't a beta but If you just accept the decisions of other(doesn't matter who) without thinking about it then you are a beta.well, but that is just my opinion.
