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GoddessAlbedo
GoddessAlbedoLv141yr
2023-07-14 18:06

First of all The story has great potential, the villain mc was great and the plot was fantastic. Now here’s the problem Many words not wording correctly Hard to understand unless you read MLT before and even then it is hard to understand. I suggest rewriting it and fixing many of the grammer mistake. Also I get that you are trying to make the mc overpowered and started taking everything (former)mc would have before(former) mc gets it but give the (former mc) some chance. Destorying them before they start to get stronger is good and all, But giving them hope and chance then crushing them (Imp) is better Take his (future wife) infront him then taking them before they meet or slowly destorying everything they build then finally killing them 😅 Well overall I really wanted to give 3.5/5 but I just can’t >.< sorry

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Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthor

Thanks for the review, As for grammar mistakes it is because I am writing this novel on my mobile phone so most of the time auto correct does the spelling mistake then it could correct. I will took some time and correct the mistakes after sometime.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

A lot of author’s write on their phone, including me, and it’s really not that hard. Trash excuse.

Parshant_Morwal:Thanks for the review, As for grammar mistakes it is because I am writing this novel on my mobile phone so most of the time auto correct does the spelling mistake then it could correct. I will took some time and correct the mistakes after sometime.
Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthor

Writing one or two chapters is not said writing novel 😂🤣😂. **Ahem** Well on to the topic I have already started to edit the chapters and there were many mistakes but I think that if you want you can give it a try now.

Kw0z:A lot of author’s write on their phone, including me, and it’s really not that hard. Trash excuse.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Went 29 chapters and still haven’t gotten a single complaint from anyone about my grammar. You’re just bad at spelling, bot.

Parshant_Morwal:Writing one or two chapters is not said writing novel 😂🤣😂. **Ahem** Well on to the topic I have already started to edit the chapters and there were many mistakes but I think that if you want you can give it a try now.
Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthor

Yes I do am bad at spelling. 😂 Also I am not forcing anyone to read my novel. Not to mention that I had already corrected and edited chapters though their can be some mistakes but atleast it is readable. English is not my first language also.

Kw0z:Went 29 chapters and still haven’t gotten a single complaint from anyone about my grammar. You’re just bad at spelling, bot.
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

“English is not my first language” Is that supposed to be an excuse? If you’re going to learn a language, learn it correctly.

Parshant_Morwal:Yes I do am bad at spelling. 😂 Also I am not forcing anyone to read my novel. Not to mention that I had already corrected and edited chapters though their can be some mistakes but atleast it is readable. English is not my first language also.
Parshant_Morwal
Parshant_MorwalAuthor

This is not a excuse. I am telling you that if you want to read a content that has not any grammar mistakes then you should not read mine just because there can be mistakes in mine novel. I am telling you that 'English is not my first language' just so you or anyone don't except a top tier English and novel without any grammar mistakes from me and like I said before I am not forcing you or anyone to read my novel. If you like you will read it, but if you don't like then naturally you will not read it.

Kw0z:“English is not my first language” Is that supposed to be an excuse? If you’re going to learn a language, learn it correctly.
KayIsBored_1
KayIsBored_1Lv4

Bro is trying to start a fight for no reason.

Kw0z:“English is not my first language” Is that supposed to be an excuse? If you’re going to learn a language, learn it correctly.
Divine_rod
Divine_rodLv4

I feel him. Fk seriously tho just as he said" their conversation feels so stupid" and mc personality is horrible. Fk

KayIsBored_1:Bro is trying to start a fight for no reason.
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