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Biro
BiroLv154mth
2024-10-18 05:57

I don't really want to bash on this book, but it doesn't really click with me. Sure, it is an OP mc, and sure it is a woman instead of a man, but my main issue is about what action gets skipped and summarized and what doesn't. Like we get a full description of all 20 bosses of a floor, and then we skip straight to "she defeated them all", not even the fight but after the conclusion. The story tends to just skip ahead every encounter leaving just summaries. I had some hope with the gods fight but it just dialed right back in when we follow the MC, exposition details on stuff that never seems even relevant a chapter later and action or drama skipped just afterwards. I really wanted to like this, but at chapter 55 (20ish paid chapters) I just give up.

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valid but Elena is just way too strong. There are a few descriptive fights among the gods through and later on when Elena faced off against other people of similar level, I did describe the fight a little bit. Actually the main focus of the story is Elena meeting with various people, helping them and having a fun life. I mainly describe the character and the world as that is what I want to be the centre of the story. Elena being OP doesn't really make the fights serious. Thanks for taking your time to write a review and checking my book out. Sad that it was not to your taste but if it was able to give you even a little bit of comfort then I'm happy about it. Thanks (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

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FU_HUA
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is this going to have romance if so please a yuri,not fan of straight romance if the mc is female

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PSR_Invincible
PSR_InvincibleLv1

I am a big fan of female MC. I am big fan of Overpowered MC. I'm also a big fan of fantasy rpg type stories. So, everything in this novel is something I enjoy. I am really loving this. Please upload more chapters as I can not wait for more.

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Hell_Chaos_Nether
Hell_Chaos_NetherLv1

I am very big fan of OP protagonist. Here the protagonist does look very strong. I want to see her decimate opponent. It will be very fun to see her doing that. I want more and more chapters. And can you write in 3rd person POV instead of st person. It feels weird somehow. Please upload faster. Thank you...

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_Omniscient
_OmniscientLv1

I'm enjoying the novel so far. Keep up the good work. I hope that Elena's adventurers starts very soon. I'm looking forward to it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

1yr
Blazing_Passion
Blazing_PassionLv1

I'm really enjoying the novel. I want more novel with female protagonist. I am really looking forward to Elena's future development. The characters introduced so far are interesting.

1yr
Reyviel_Faesly
Reyviel_FaeslyLv13

YESSSSS! FINALLY! A novel with a female lead with No Yuri 😭 I appreciate your steadfast heart and mind for not being moved by the horniness of this App. It's a great novel and I would highly recommend you read it. ✨

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Peaceful_Sky_God
Peaceful_Sky_GodLv1

The starting is looking good. Can't wait for the start of her adventure. I am really enjoying the female MC. I really need more chapters. I still can not judge the novel as I don't have enough content. I always like OP character and she is looking hella strong. Please continue wrong the novel.

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Grand_Dao_Ancestor
Grand_Dao_AncestorLv1

I like how the protagonist doesn't always defend everyone. I like ruthless characters a lot but sometimes the protagonists are comically ruthless which I hate. But here she had perfect balance between ruthlessness and generosity. The update efficiency is also very good. I will like to see more about this world and Elena's past world. So please keep up the good work.

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Mystic_Phantom
Mystic_PhantomLv11

I just started reading this story not expecting much as most of the stories with female MC became very bland over time. But I glad after reading till chapter 40. I like the MC a lot. Other characters of the stoty are also very well written. I'm looking forward to the world building too.

1yr
P_S_R
P_S_RLv1

This is getting amazing. It have a very comfy pace to it. Please keep this up. I'm really enjoying it so much. This is very awesome. 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰

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