This is an au with a mind numbing mishmash of characters and events. It takes from the mcu, pre mcu, spiderverse, insomniac spiderman, netflix marvel and more. As one would expect this results a whole slew of issues with a coherent setting being the lest of them. Spiderman and his posse are meant to be city-level threat heroes, hence his very popular saying 'just your friendly neughbourhood spiderman'. Any time he's elevated above that level, the story loses its charm, and this fic suffers from that same problem. Why do I care what peter personal struggles and life are when reality bending beings have their eyes on him. Lastly, this mc is not a villain, just a violent antihero and it seems like its going to turn into a harem. Wish the tags made that clear.
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first attempt but thanks, amma try to improve in later chaps
Harem or No-Harem ? we need to know .
Othniel_Seth:first attempt but thanks, amma try to improve in later chaps
haven't decided yet. but it's looking like it might be more than one, although if it's actually going to be a harem or not depends on your perspective I guess.
Hugo_Adam:Harem or No-Harem ? we need to know .
I couldn't help but notice the direction the history seem to be going, and since you didn't put any tags regarding that, I decided to ask you myself. That being said, thank you for answering and I want you to know that I've genuinely enjoyed the history so far, but unfortunately harem or polygamy of any kind aren't my cup of tea, so I guess that's the end of the road for me, wish you the best of luck .
Othniel_Seth:haven't decided yet. but it's looking like it might be more than one, although if it's actually going to be a harem or not depends on your perspective I guess.
well, that's ok I guess, though I have to add it's not going to be that standard harem root more victims of circumstance kinda thing. there's no definitive pairing yet aside from death but her relationship with Peter can't be defined by human social norms. I haven't decided which route to take despite how it's looking. it could be a single pairing by the fics end but I mean he is Peter Parker and he has dated quite a few girls in the Marvel setting and has a lot more interested in him for various reasons. So like I said, amma see where it takes me, as a writer I wanna ask you to keep reading to see where it goes cause you might enjoy it but to each their own I guess. Thanks for reading so far- hope it was an enjoyable read for you. Maybe one day soon I shall see you in my notifs. It was my honor to have you reading my first fic.
Hugo_Adam:I couldn't help but notice the direction the history seem to be going, and since you didn't put any tags regarding that, I decided to ask you myself. That being said, thank you for answering and I want you to know that I've genuinely enjoyed the history so far, but unfortunately harem or polygamy of any kind aren't my cup of tea, so I guess that's the end of the road for me, wish you the best of luck .image
whats not to say he might have a few flings here and their before the final pairing.
Hugo_Adam:I couldn't help but notice the direction the history seem to be going, and since you didn't put any tags regarding that, I decided to ask you myself. That being said, thank you for answering and I want you to know that I've genuinely enjoyed the history so far, but unfortunately harem or polygamy of any kind aren't my cup of tea, so I guess that's the end of the road for me, wish you the best of luck .image
Can you answer my question, or are you intentionally ignoring it?
Othniel_Seth:whats not to say he might have a few flings here and their before the final pairing.
your question was what now?
Andrew_KING:Can you answer my question, or are you intentionally ignoring it?
Othniel_Seth:your question was what now?
if this is about the harem thing, I honestly don't know, am writing the story as I go along, and relationships form when I feel like that's where the plot is headed. I didn't make up my mind about the pairing when I started writing that's why I can't answer whether it's going to be harem or not cause I genuinely don't know who he will end up with or how many he might be with when the story concludes. For all I know he might end up alone or he might date one of the many love interests or just end up in a harem.
Andrew_KING:Can you answer my question, or are you intentionally ignoring it?
his a villain, more anti-hero but he will kill a lot of people. he won't be viewed as good by any stretch of the imagination, not by the good guys anyway.
Andrew_KING:image
I don't care about harems or romance. In fact, this story would be much better without them.
Othniel_Seth:if this is about the harem thing, I honestly don't know, am writing the story as I go along, and relationships form when I feel like that's where the plot is headed. I didn't make up my mind about the pairing when I started writing that's why I can't answer whether it's going to be harem or not cause I genuinely don't know who he will end up with or how many he might be with when the story concludes. For all I know he might end up alone or he might date one of the many love interests or just end up in a harem.
Thanks for answering my question.
Othniel_Seth:his a villain, more anti-hero but he will kill a lot of people. he won't be viewed as good by any stretch of the imagination, not by the good guys anyway.
No pro, I kinda missed it
Andrew_KING:Thanks for answering my question.
