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Rakuuh
RakuuhLv31yr
2023-08-19 04:06

Ya leí este fan fic y se me hace aburrido pero te doy 5 estrellas por como te esforzaste a arreglar algunas partes en chino se lo difícil que es arreglar partes en chino ya que estoy traducción 3 fan fic chinos y se me hace difícil y algunas partes en imposible arreglar

The day of studying in Hogwarts

young_sunlight
3.9
319 Chs

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Alchemist
AlchemistLv13

The translation is good, but the MC is really annoying. He talks about how he has a humble attitude and doesn't like to show off, because he's originally from China, yet he constantly brags and shows off his wealth and knowledge. I just can't enjoy the story with such an annoying, unlikeable MC.

1yr

Insta_username
Insta_usernameLv2

Translation is very good Story is interesting but it is slow burn Too slow for me I read around 50chapters but MC is still in his 2nd day of Hogwarts I will not read it anymore but i will recommend if you can handle slow progress Stories

1yr
DracoWolf20
DracoWolf20Lv4

I like the story but it does have strong down sides. The inability to get the names right or even to keep them the same inside a same chapter is confusing and a sign of shoddy editing. I mean some change 3 times in a couple of paragraphs, it’s not difficult to go back and clearly change the names and it would massively improve coherence. Overall, like the story but need proper editing.

1yr
Robson_Danilo_5112
Robson_Danilo_5112Lv3

A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio. A historia é suave e agradavel, mas seria bom você por o link do autor original para evitar que você seja apontando como plagio.

1yr
SpookierSapling
SpookierSaplingLv14

Giving a 5 star just because this is literally the first translation I’ve seen that I couldn’t tell was a translation it’s that good writing quality

1yr
Prison
PrisonLv5

it's a slow pace story but otherwise a good read.

1yr
GamerFTW
GamerFTWLv4

This Reminds me of The Fanfic bloodline wizard and seems to be a bit of a copy and is way to slow for me

1yr
malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I'm sorry I couldn't get you out of your patreon. but here I will try to comment on each part. Thanks in advance.. . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . .

1yr
Skywalker404
Skywalker404Lv4

A really good start feels very realistic

1yr
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