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Gothicthewitch
GothicthewitchLv121yr
2023-08-27 22:06

Just added this i believe I'm really going to like this so you'll definitely be getting a more in depth review soon.

Destiny Forgers

TsukasaFrier
4.8
73 Chs

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TsukasaFrier
TsukasaFrierAuthor

Thank you so much!

1yr
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redlady
redladyLv1

This is the second time review the novel .Guys , you don't know what you lose by no reading this novel .It is a dramatic masterpiece ! Please support the author that for real is doing a great job !

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Purple_Fantasies74
Purple_Fantasies74Lv4

Wow this novel is really good and I also love the world building and idea development of this book. keep it up author 🥰🥰......................

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ATOMIC_MOON
ATOMIC_MOONLv3

An easy to read novel with very good narration the writing quality is good too and the world-building and plot are excellent I am looking forward to being part of that mysterious girl's journey Keep up the good work Author

1yr
Sapphire_Ace
Sapphire_AceLv3

The story is seemingly well thought out, the world building is decent, it has an easy flow when it comes to reading it. The characters could be fleshed out more but the main character is basically a blank slate so I can't really complain... There's minor errors in every chapter regarding the writing quality but it's pretty readable for the most part.

1yr
musa45
musa45Lv2

This novel is easy to read, chapters aren't so long and the narration are on point and descriptive. easy language is there and proper diaogues making me to connect. good work author keep it up

1yr
Annisax
AnnisaxLv4

This story is so catching and touching. The first chapters got me in my feelings already. It is amazing how good you describe the incidents happening, makes me feel like I am in the story myself. Well done!!!

1yr
yunjun
yunjunLv14

Interesting start. I am curious about the mysterious girl's identity. A lot of worldbuilding can be seen, the author also did a good job in depicting the cruelty of war. The only thing I would like to point out is that dialogue tags are overused at times, but it improves in the later chapters. Overall, great job!

1yr
Elettariahelix
ElettariahelixLv10

Awesome storyline, I feel so sad about the kids, but I'm sure this story is bound to have a happy ending. It's a journey I'll have to embark on and I'm fully ready for it. Kudos to the author....your novel is captivating

1yr
Ninestar619_5803
Ninestar619_5803Lv4

This book is way too awesome to be alone. The interesting part starts from the start. A great story awaits you if you just read the first page. loved this book. The writing style is great and strong. liked the words and sentences construction. keep it up

1yr
DreamMerchantH
DreamMerchantHLv2

The writing is good, grammar is to the point and story progress fascinatingly. The mystery element around which the story revolves is to the point, and it will make you seek the answers more and more with each passing chapter.

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