Review Detail of Mc_Fly in Ruling Hollywood

The story is good, English isn't my first language, so I can't review the grammar. Therefore, I will talk about the plot. Spoilers ahead. It's been 15 chapters, yet the main lead is still a baby and had less than 1 hour of "screen time" As a personal preference, I would have enjoyed it more if we were shown each personality and its perks from the pov of the parents as the prologue. Instead, we got a subject that could cause a crisis for the personalities even before we could create an emotional connection with them. I believe it would have been better to fit small insights into it through the years and let the readers slowly realize what is happening. Nevertheless, it is a good story, and people should try it. I find myself excited to see how it develops.