Review Detail of hooves in Immortal In Supernatural
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not bad though it does make me sad that the author decided to add an OC love interest and entire plotline with it's own antagonist. as with every fanfic I hesitate when the author wants to back away from the world they have JUST inhabited to introduce their own characters and problems that are completely new. it's not the worst I have seen done but it is a little disappointing but i am sure others can get around it and is still a great story regardless of that small gripe.
Immortal In Supernatural
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they do appear from what I remember it is just a backseat to the antagonist of this main character. I don't remember much or how far i got but I left when it was a few chapters and pretty much the entirety of supernatural was forgotten or no longer mentioned. it's basically a separate story contained in that world with it's own issues. i didn't like the oc love interest all that much or the created antagonist so the separate concept rubbed me the wrong way. but it's good for those that want to read a story with the same supernatural elements but if you wanted the supernatural story like many do when reading a fanfic i would guess like me one might be disappointed.
Lc_The_Second:Wait. So we don't see the major Winchester plot unfold? If not, then they will barely appear than. I thought they would appear more. Since they showed up at the beginning when Jessica died. I was hoping.
hooves:they do appear from what I remember it is just a backseat to the antagonist of this main character. I don't remember much or how far i got but I left when it was a few chapters and pretty much the entirety of supernatural was forgotten or no longer mentioned. it's basically a separate story contained in that world with it's own issues. i didn't like the oc love interest all that much or the created antagonist so the separate concept rubbed me the wrong way. but it's good for those that want to read a story with the same supernatural elements but if you wanted the supernatural story like many do when reading a fanfic i would guess like me one might be disappointed.
me neither. let me know if you do try it and you find a different experience then i did with the separate story. I could be wrong I stopped after i didn't foresee any intersection.
Lc_The_Second:I didn't want a spinoff