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ViciousPepper
ViciousPepperLv41yr
2023-06-22 01:55

The author's storytelling ability shines through in this story, immersing readers in Adam's journey. The descriptions are vivid, helping readers to paint the picture in their minds. A great novel...

My interracial harem of beautiful queens

MisterBombastic
4.8
277 Chs

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MisterBombastic
MisterBombasticAuthor

Friends, please have your attention. This book contains 18+ scenes and is a harem. I hope you enjoy it. Don't forget to add to your library and help promote the book if you wish. Enjoy reading it! (P.S.: There will be almost no young girls in the harem. Most are mature women.) (Pictured Amariah, Queen of the Elves)

1yr

_Frost_
_Frost_Lv13

I have read up to chapter 20 and this is my thoughts so far. writing quality I put 4 stars, honestly for most part had no issue with reading the novel, there's just a few mistakes every now and then like repeating of words or mixing up male and female. most notable mistake that kinda hurts the story is when you are explain the 7 sins you put wrath twice and believe left out sloth.Now story development and character design I put 2 and 3 stars. Story feels rushed and because of that it also hurts Character development. Between the fact that the Mc was nobody and yet he's already in a capital interacting, pursuing and starting relationships with the most important characters within the country at ch20? Then we have the power scaling issues created because of this, you have a A- tier character that one of his duties is to watch over the castle the queen resides wanting to kill the Mc but for some reason such a important character only has the weakest or soldiers F- under him? would a imagine a A- captain assigned to the capital to have squads under him made up of D-C rank soldiers with C soldiers making up squad lead positions. with lieutenant positions being filled by C and B rank soldiers. Don't think you should of introduced this character as a rival to the Mc so soon.updating stability 5 stars- there's only praise for you to be able to upload so many chapters each week.Also just my preference, a harem made up of characters that all have different names but had no character development to distinguish them from the other characters might at as well all be the same character. Chill on the fan service and start putting challenges and arcs in place to really test and develop the main character other characters within the world.

1yr
AYESHA_FAHIM
AYESHA_FAHIMLv1

I was initially discouraged to read the novel since I dislike gloomy beginnings, but as I read it, I became increasingly curious as to what will happen next. I can't wait for the next chapter of this fantastic novel. The characters, in my opinion, have improved. Since it maintains the reader's interest, it is enjoyable to read for an extended amount of time. The book has me interested since it seems too good to be true.

1yr
BronzeWarGod
BronzeWarGodLv15

seamlessly well written. highly recommend if you want an interesting level up novel with romance and nsfw.

1yr
Drew_Sansone
Drew_SansoneLv15

Good read. Good world. Good lore. Imo author I’d like more lore added you come up with interesting stories. Thank you

1yr
DaoisteFIaMW
DaoisteFIaMWLv15

Just helping I like the friendly neighborhood Spider-Man

1yr
Tripple1ZRO
Tripple1ZROLv15

The story so far is interesting and stability is good. The development has not been too fast, and the build up is getting there. Looking forward to more chapters!

1yr
Cris_pan
Cris_panLv3

I'm highly impressed by the author's nearly flawless writing! Such interesting characters! I love how dynamic they are and how well the writer relays it. So much for a first book 👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥 I highly recommend this novel. Prepare to be fully immersed in the plot.

1yr
Micke1
Micke1Lv4

The MC is just like a doll without any emotion!!

1yr
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