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2024-07-03 12:23

This story still amazes me on a personal level with the Fox Spirit, Military Vets, lingo and training practices (not as detailed as I'd like, but with good overall explanation.) 'Dead Check Girl' and 'Shotgun loli' hit somewhere close to home. I really like the FL's take on pragmatic approaches towards prison societal procedures and I adore how Yang is also morally pragmatic about it with some struggle. 'LONG LIVE TANG' is still my motto, however, I'm not really into multiple partners, my kid would kill me if I had such a fetish. My job is rigorous, time consuming with lots of physical training for the boys, away from home for long period of time, and sometimes, commission jobs. My only mental break sometimes is reading, funny reads, amusing reads, brainy reads or reads that get my creative painting going. This story is nice, it hits spots where I wish regulations would ease up or if i had FL's monetary power or at least be her subordinate, I'd enjoy life more. Grammatically, it does need work, however, writers usually struggle monetarily because, you know, life happens. However, the literary aspect in terms of plot and direction is well thought out, so is the humor dialogue and action of different characters. I never give reviews or leave comments, but this story hit a satisfying spot. As a bibliophile, I like this story very much.

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PraiseElune
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Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]

PraiseElune
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Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]

ChenmoizmV
ChenmoizmVLv14

I don’t need it. I can already see Tang in my head. Like I said. If u had a good editor. This story is good enough for print.

PraiseElune:Thank you for your awesome support and I'm honored to be your first author to receive your review. I truly am grateful to you for sharing our life difficulties managing time and work plus survival, too. I hope you can enjoy what's about to come in the next chapters, and I'll try to meet my fans' expectations. If only were I excellent in AI arts, I would have drawn Tang Ziyi portraits. By the way, you receive my sincere wish to enjoy life more and more manifestation to come in your way.[img=recommend]
PraiseElune
PraiseEluneAuthor

Thank you. I don't know where i can find a good editor when I'm struggling with money myself xD

ChenmoizmV:I don’t need it. I can already see Tang in my head. Like I said. If u had a good editor. This story is good enough for print.
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