Sigh... another fic with awful grammar. Well, this time I forgot to read the synopsis and regretted it instantly. So... here I am and might as well leave a review. With sentences like "the man inside the dark room name was Rei, he suffers from allbinism for 25 years since childhood, his skin is pure white and his long hair isn't even dark colored one just like most common people had, the worst thing was he couldn't step outside under the sun for risk of skin" you can see how hard it would be to read this story. I can't believe, that people would enjoy reading this. You really need a better translator (I guess), but the idea itself it not bad.
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thank you for your review, and so sorry for awful grammar(english isn't my native language) but, i'll try my best to improve my grammar in the future chapter, thank you very much
Or use chat gpt
Yeah, you can try chat GPT or Grammarly for most grammatical issues. It works well for me.
Bruh ...... You are an Indian right. Most Indians do a better job than this. Don't make excuses...... We learn English from like what kindergarten..... sheesh ...... I know many fics written by Indians which did a better job than this..
