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Dissapointed_One
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I have no words. Oh wait, found them. So MC doesn't exist, story doesn't exist as well, and author repeats himself multiple gimes. Writing itself is weird and creepy, "dialogues" are not a thing, everything is presented in facts instead. Also author seems to be Russian, and as a Russian man myself, i do not recommend to read this poor attempt at writing.

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Old Man's MetaUniverse Café

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RockSaur
RockSaurAuthorRockSaur

You're right, it's terrible. Thanks to you, I saw my problems, now I can improve myself. And dialogues, you're goddamn right (again)

LittleLemur
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you saved other's time, thank you