Dissapointed_One
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Dissapointed_One4hReplied to Helia_KingCould be worse is not an excuse. It's still fails to capture the reader. Unless you REALLY have nothing to read.
I just got transmigrated here with a system that told me that I can summon anyone from anime worlds and more as I level up- Dissapointed_One17hReplied to Saint_Visthrul4
you pov
"Someone Anyone, Please Help" I cried out hoping someone would help me, Then after some Time I felt someone Moving the rubble, Am I gonna be saved? Please be a human, after a few minutes I saw a relatively young boy with red eyes,brown hair and also has Two small pink colored cheeks….. - Dissapointed_One17hReplied to Helia_King
Oh i know, i can read. Don't know how that relates to this disgusting beginning.
I just got transmigrated here with a system that told me that I can summon anyone from anime worlds and more as I level up - Dissapointed_One1dReplied to drunk_young_master
go sober up
A voice came from behind. Aoto turned his head to look at the person who he recognized from the voice. The voice of young Ayame. Ayame was the daughter of the shop that was opposite to their current damaged bakery. - Dissapointed_One1dReplied to Im4x_sk1ll
i can't confirm nor deny your claim, so look at the monke
A.N: So this idea of mine came on a whim and after thinking about it for awhile, it could turn into an actual good story if I don't flop it. If you guys don't know what are Chat Groups about, it's basically a pseudo Gamer's System that you can buy some items in its store and rewards you for missions that would assign to the Group. And as the "Dimension" part suggests, we'll mostly be on other dimensions/worlds in the story. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
Wasted opportunity for a good joke.
In a higher planes of existence, there's boy sitting and watching our protagonists interactions; his name is Author. Seeing this message, Author glared and said "He needs to be silenced." - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
Horrible and outright wrong description of group chats 💀
A.N: So this idea of mine came on a whim and after thinking about it for awhile, it could turn into an actual good story if I don't flop it. If you guys don't know what are Chat Groups about, it's basically a pseudo Gamer's System that you can buy some items in its store and rewards you for missions that would assign to the Group. And as the "Dimension" part suggests, we'll mostly be on other dimensions/worlds in the story. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
joining the ? fix it
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It's safe to assume we know what fourarms is. But feel free to spoon feed your readers, not like talking down to your audience ever turned out badly.
FourArms: One of Ben's original 10 transformations when he first unlocked the Omnitrix; and as it's name suggests, this Alien gives Ben four arms that can pack a very mean punch with a very monstrous strength included. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
Yep, seventh drop of the day, nothin good to read as always.
Distracted for a small fraction of a moment, the mitachurl threw the slime at me, the small explosion it caused bringing my concentration back. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
Thats it? He came to Mondstarhuntir and immediately left? Too little. Needed more.
After that, I started walking toward Windrise. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
I don't believe in this. This cannot be a real interaction.
"Very well. You're quite in luck. The guild has been short on members for a time now," she said with a polite smile. "Normally the recruitment process is more strict, but for now..." - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
So the fact she is an outomaton doesn't bother you? Of course not.
"Hey there. Uh, I came here to join the guild," I said, feeling a bit awkward talking to a videogame character brought to life. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
show don't tell
Hmmm, it's kinda hard to mantain cursed energy going... Just how did Gojo do it? - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
show don't tell
I laughed in disbelief. This was too good to be true. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
SHOW DON'T TELL.
How and why? That's a good question, but it doesn't really matter. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
Never ever in no situation think! thinking is dangerous, it can lead to a working brain!
Though... It did feel a bit too easy. I've been in my fair share of fights in the past but... Well, no use thinking about it. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
yep it's a drop
Masamune got and remembered all her memories when she was 9 years old, it happened right when she woke up from her deep sleep after she was insulted and humiliated by Adagaki Aki or rather Koiwai Yoshino who disguised himself as Adagaki Aki to vent his frustration on Masamune by insulting and humiliating her right in front of the bullies because he was jealous of Masamune and Aki's relationship. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
idiot should i just drop now it clearly shows no promise so far
At the moment Masamune woke up, he became a baby, he had very vague memories, and at first he only vaguely remembered that he had lived a life in his past and didn't really remember the details, it happened about 14 years ago. - Dissapointed_One1dCommented
why is moron talking oit loud
"Makabe Masamune, that's who I am now!"