It could be ALOT better. I mean I had really high hopes, but guess that was my fault Only read 1 chapter so take my review with a grain of salt. I just know this fic ain't for me, especially after reading the AN at the end of the chapter. Also your missing some words in the chapter. May be best to go back over it author.
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Oh , yes. I should update AN. This fanfic is now my main focus and it has 18 chapters in drafts. But yes,. i suppose not everyone would like it, it should be comedy after all, that was at first,
Yeah I don't particularly like comedy as the main focus. I prefer it if it's few and far between.
MegaDanijel:Oh , yes. I should update AN. This fanfic is now my main focus and it has 18 chapters in drafts. But yes,. i suppose not everyone would like it, it should be comedy after all, that was at first,
Yeah, it "was" supposed to be, but;. Check my Chapter 6 spoiler ideas, you could see few things i have edited in my fanfic few days ago. Main character would slowly become evil-like and how Comedy was slowly dropped off.
Infinite_Shadow_57:Yeah I don't particularly like comedy as the main focus. I prefer it if it's few and far between.
