MegaDanijel
My first language is not Enlgish. All fanfictions i make are non-serious work.
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MegaDanijel4 months agoReplied to eltulutuluwild
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to Charlie_English
Well true, had to make some modifications when it comes to losing 'Avenger' class and remaining only 'Archer' Class
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to Charlie_English
It's invalid, I took his distortion and avenger away. Distortion is useless, avenger is mana hog
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to HollowDaoist
Original Alcides does not, in Fate/Strange Fake, Alcides master has sacrificed about 28k humans and turned them into mana crystals for Alcides use. And thosee 28k would be barely enough to sustain Alcides for several months. Because of that issue I added 'Hydra-Kind-Modification'
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to Fateguy
true, but he is not alcides, he is alex,
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to KermitUrMom
true
- MegaDanijela year agoCommented
Crazy!
- MegaDanijela year agoReplied to MegaDanijel
Honestly, that's about it. 'With grain of salt'.[img=proud]
- MegaDanijela year agoPosted
Honestly, take this review with a grain of salt. I gave this story 4.4 for following. A new idea, I never saw crossover with a 'character from Tensura into Overlord' even when that character only has 'appearance. Or maybe I did but forgot. Stability of Updates: Even though story is officially dropped, one chapter per is enough for 5 stars here. Story Development: I read all chapters on wattpad from the Author, but unfortunately you cannot give a review there like here. So, story finished at 22th Chapter and finished Season 1. It could have had decent development and maybe 80+ chapters if Author continued writing. But honestly, I'm hyped for next works from you on Wattpad! Character Design: Though, what I don't like is how MC switched from 'hysteria' to 'it is what it is' when it comes to gender change. Maybe more 'insight on gender change' could have been better, I don't know? World Background: Author certainly took his time to write interactions between Brain and Velzard, since Nazarick was not in this world, it could have resulted in huge butterfly effect thus opening many paths for MC to take But till 22th Chapter, MC was only concentrating on learning his abilities and working as Adventurer in E-Rantel. And since I read on Wattpad, I can say that Author planned grand-reveal to public if fanfic ever made it long way but unfortunately it didn't. Though, for short reading - for several days, I'm satisfied, though if this story had like + 30 more chapters even if they were rushed could have been better, just my opinion. So I gave it 4.4 rating, though it's just my preference.
- MegaDanijela year agoCommented
Did you post it on somewhere else then?
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