That's just great. I bloody love the synopsis and the beginning of the story. The grammar is good, enjoyable to read, we'll see what happens next.
DeeplyLostInShadow
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Everything. is. for. Ais. Wallenstein! Apart from that, thank you for the review. I'm also super invested in this project, both as a reader and as a writer. I wish someone else was the writer so that I could read it.
Looks like the AI tried hard enough