Sasha_Reaper

It might not be a bad story, but I wouldn't exactly call it a good one either. Thragg has absolutely no motivation to change his ways. He basically gives up on the Viltrumian race right away and starts living with a random girl he rescued in an alley. I feel like I’m watching not a mighty warrior who’s lived for an insanely long time, but rather a child who needs explanations for the most basic things.

Why not? The story is definitely worth reading, though I feel like there’s sometimes a lack of analysis of the main character’s stats. After 20 chapters, we understand that he’s strong, but it’s not entirely clear just how strong. Although I think that will become clear in the battle against Bumi.

I just thought you were asking about enemy HP or something like that in the previous chapters. There are just so many units in TW3, since the series was made a long time ago, and you could have borrowed some units from there.

Hey. Have you thought about using enemy HP and MP, like from the game Total War: Warhammer? Each unit has its own value, and you can just multiply it if it seems too low—that should work fine.

Thanks for the chapter

One commenter correctly pointed out that it would have been easier to let Koneko die and then resurrect her than to put everything at risk. A dull situation, boring chapters.

Weird plot development.

Madara? Ehhhh

A good story, but not enough chapters yet.