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Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneLv41yr
2023-06-25 23:48

I just have one thing to ask. How can this novel STILL not be talked about? This author is a ghost. 15 days and 44 chaps, which is crazy enough, but the writing is superb, development is crazy good, Ren is a three-dimensional character that is FULL of problems and yet we all love him because he's just that cool and amazing. The background was really finely made, tailored perfectly to match his own problems. I don't believe there is a better Danmachi fanfic. This novel does not need to add systems, stuff from anime or novels. It's crazy good just with what we got. I hope this will grow well, hoping this will reach top 1.

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Mystero
MysteroLv12

I wont read it simply because of how much of a simp he is for Ais.

Tarantula_Paragon
Tarantula_ParagonLv5

Because the mc loves Ais the cute airhead that's not based on shiina by any means..., also there some things that any poison testers even bellow my level would detect easily in the first 20 chaps and avoid reading further, I'm my case I just jumped to the end of asura world part and I'm just reading the danmachi development and for sure quitting the moment he ends with danmachi.(if it's even planned to continue with the fic after the mc leaves danmachi).

Tarantula_Paragon
Tarantula_ParagonLv5

Clearfying, some things like the whole interaction with eve would make me seek a detoxing session reading my own poor FFs after reading, like dark energy or whatever talent, the asura race, the development and plot on that planet, eve herself, the system. Any of those would be a red flag and I'm surprised with how the author love for his Ais could feed his liars frenesy to develop it soo well, I can't imagine any development better to read without changing dramatically the history and even if some parts feeling uneasy to read due to my own preceits and taste I can tell you that this is not a bad FF. I respect Ren's love for Ais as mine for Liliruca as character (and waifu) only growns since I read the manga and watch the anime near a decade ago...

Tarantula_Paragon:Because the mc loves Ais the cute airhead that's not based on shiina by any means..., also there some things that any poison testers even bellow my level would detect easily in the first 20 chaps and avoid reading further, I'm my case I just jumped to the end of asura world part and I'm just reading the danmachi development and for sure quitting the moment he ends with danmachi.(if it's even planned to continue with the fic after the mc leaves danmachi).
Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneLv4

Suit yourself mate, you're losing out on the good stuff

Mystero:I wont read it simply because of how much of a simp he is for Ais.
DarkMouth
DarkMouthLv4

Your below average intelligence is baffling mate, Most of the fics you read are full of simps anyways.

Mystero:I wont read it simply because of how much of a simp he is for Ais.
Insert_Here
Insert_HereLv13

people are stupid

Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

This platform is full of mc emos and with attitude problems, plus the author's obsession with the character of ains leaks a bit

Slayer_King_One
Slayer_King_OneLv4

So what? I'm sorry if ur used to such high quality work on webnovel! You don't even know what ur talking about, just keep reviewing your one piece fics.

Drako_0692:This platform is full of mc emos and with attitude problems, plus the author's obsession with the character of ains leaks a bit
Drako_0692
Drako_0692Lv1

You asked why he doesn't have as much support and I answered you. Don't ask questions if you don't want to hear the answer.

Slayer_King_One:So what? I'm sorry if ur used to such high quality work on webnovel! You don't even know what ur talking about, just keep reviewing your one piece fics.
Idol_sama
Idol_samaLv1

I think ur just really not that smart.

Drako_0692:You asked why he doesn't have as much support and I answered you. Don't ask questions if you don't want to hear the answer.
Aetherrr
AetherrrLv4

Then don't

Mystero:I wont read it simply because of how much of a simp he is for Ais.
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