Hello, new review from the Author. 1. Is this a harem story? Yes, it is a harem, but the harem elements are not the main focus of the book. The protagonist will eventually have relationships with multiple women, but that will happen further down the line. 2. Will the game and the real world become one? No, the protagonist will have two lives, one inside the game and one outside the game. He will gain wealth and reputation from the game, but also from the real world. 3. How are the characters portrayed? Are the side characters well-developed? The characters in the book are all unique and their personalities are well-defined. I'm sure you will be fond of both the protagonist, the female characters, and the side characters. 4. Are there wikis and illustrations? Please read the auxiliary chapters, where I provide illustrations and a link to a Google Sheet. Is there anything else you would like to know? Please leave your question in this review.
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LIKENovaCorp:I havent started reading yet (I will after I post this), but will the mc have good combat abilities irl?
Which personality are you referring here? But please read further, then you can evaluate him further.
machadogbc:Will his base personality remain the same as in the beginning or will he change as the story goes?
I myself don’t really know how to describe it, just that I have read barely 20 something chapters and it’s getting hard to read with the way he is acting, not to mention how axaegerated obnoxious everyone but his sister, the goddess and the fox are. Just wanted to know if it’s the pattern for the story or if it‘s just for the beginning.
Galanteo:Which personality are you referring here? But please read further, then you can evaluate him further.
Ah.... If you say so, then you already know how I write the characters around the MC, some interesting, some annoying, but most of his allies will be useful and helpful to him. Yes, and please read further at least the free chapter, and later you will know about MC, he is determined, hardworking, and never doubts anything he does.
machadogbc:I myself don’t really know how to describe it, just that I have read barely 20 something chapters and it’s getting hard to read with the way he is acting, not to mention how axaegerated obnoxious everyone but his sister, the goddess and the fox are. Just wanted to know if it’s the pattern for the story or if it‘s just for the beginning.
Alright, just one more thing if you don’t mind, how will the kingdom building work? Will it be a guild, a ingame kingdom with the princess, in the real world or something else?
Galanteo:Ah.... If you say so, then you already know how I write the characters around the MC, some interesting, some annoying, but most of his allies will be useful and helpful to him. Yes, and please read further at least the free chapter, and later you will know about MC, he is determined, hardworking, and never doubts anything he does.
It's a Kingdom in the game, but I don't want to share the details as it might ruin your reading experiences.
machadogbc:Alright, just one more thing if you don’t mind, how will the kingdom building work? Will it be a guild, a ingame kingdom with the princess, in the real world or something else?
machadogbc:Alright, just one more thing if you don’t mind, how will the kingdom building work? Will it be a guild, a ingame kingdom with the princess, in the real world or something else?
FallenAngeI:Will the h*rem be in both worlds? Also do you have any plans for lemons? And lastly Y*ri?
also just so u understand, not just big sad because of horni, but because if written right and can help flesh out a love story among the harem women ( talking just between mc and women, not between the mcs women )
Galanteo:No, No, No
Joethedeath:also just so u understand, not just big sad because of horni, but because if written right and can help flesh out a love story among the harem women ( talking just between mc and women, not between the mcs women )
Joethedeath:also just so u understand, not just big sad because of horni, but because if written right and can help flesh out a love story among the harem women ( talking just between mc and women, not between the mcs women )