Might be too early for a thorough review but so far the story is great, much hasn't developed plot wise or to get a full scope of who the MC is but you can easily see the potential it all has for being a good story. Grammar is definitely great as well. Hoping this won't be dropped any time soon!

dang this would be a 5 star but sadly by the time the actual story states the novel will either be dropped or take another 30 chapters how sad so only ima drop now maybe come back to see if it got better

Good novel !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is a good story do not stop writing

It's a very good novel and is very interesting to read. However, I do have a question about your upload schedule. Because you first upload daily for a few days, then three days with no new uploads, and now again two days with no new uploads. What is your upload schedule?

Great story so far, keep writing! Excited to see what comes next

Good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Muito bom, só faltou mais capítulos. A história é bem desenrolada, infelizmente não tem muitos capítulos inscritos. [img=gift][img=recommend]

Please write more author I really like this fanfic. It is so much better than some of the others I’ve read.